(sorry about the last post, it was my first) Here are the lyrics to a nearly completed song. Judge them, please.
i like it in the night time
i like it when the moon shines
i like the cool wind flowing
idly by
when the world is sleeping
thats when i dream
under cover darkness
we can run free
and watch the sunrise
burn back into the sky of our lives
i like to watch the trees shake
with reverence to the mighty wind
in darkness eveything is unknown
when the world is sleeping
thats when i dream
too many dont look
into the sky
and see the beuty
surrounding them everyday
if your scared of anything
look into darkness
and see fear isnt real
fear only clouds the truth
much like darkness
when the world is frightend
thats when i laugh
and when the worlds not safe
i stay secure
when the world is sleeping
thats when i dream
about what makes me happy
and brings me peace of mind
for you, I recomend the same
2006-08-18 19:43:25 · 14 answers · asked by friday 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
you must be on some wicked sh*t
hahahaha
2006-08-18 19:51:40 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't know what to say,but in the beginning what are you talking about you like it? It was pretty cool though
Alright if you really want me to judge it i'll give it a 6 1/2.Some parts i thought i was liking like it was deep,but not too deep but deep,and then someparts i just lost you.Like some parts i didn't know what you were talking about but other than that it's aw'ight
2006-08-19 02:52:51 · answer #2 · answered by Blucontrell Esminosa-Garcia 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your Kind Of A Freak!!! These R Freaky!!
2006-08-19 02:47:56 · answer #3 · answered by 'тнєє cσмρυтєя иєяd :) 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
return to your shelf stacking job immediately. Just kidding. I thought those were good lyrics
2006-08-19 02:49:37 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
it's ok. it doesnt sound like my kind of music but if it was to come on the radio i wouldnt change the station.
2006-08-19 02:51:27 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
YOU'RE REALLY TALENTED 2 B ABLE 2 WRITE A SONG KEEP ON WRITING
2006-08-19 02:50:44 · answer #6 · answered by research girl 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i realli realli lyk it.....its kinda freaki probabli dats why i lyk it so much lol. but if it was a song dat wud probabli b ma jam
2006-08-19 02:54:39 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice, keep on writing, you have a gift.
2006-08-19 02:49:13 · answer #8 · answered by sweetpea 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i dont think that i would like a song with those lyrics - it sounds more like therapy for you than entertainment for some1 else
2006-08-19 02:48:58 · answer #9 · answered by milhouse 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
yea it sounds like u made it up. sorry.
2006-08-19 02:50:52 · answer #10 · answered by Son6of6Satan6 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋