You Guyz Like It???

Question

[Verse 1}
The NE is where I stay
I Write Anotha Rhyme Like Everyday
My Homies Wit Me & We Dont Play
Watch Ya Back Cuz People Hate
I Rap n Sing Cuz Its My Fate
Bust Ya Mouth Open Like a Crate
My Daddy Gotta Cadi E, Ridin Up On Main Street
Here We Go, Here It Is
You Aint Neva Seen A Chick Like This
Ima B-ball Playa, Crazy Hata, Stickin Wit Her Cuz Im No Trader
Bustin Down, Ridin Out, Dis Dont Happen In The South
Comin Up, Gettin Loose
This How It Is Cuz Jerse Stay True
Just Rap, Aint No Blues
Ima Ruff Kid, Get The Clues
im 2 times of what you'll see
Thats Why No One Competes With Me
I Just Talk About Who We Be
Born n Raised In Jerayz
its a hard life like everyday
I Be Like Lil Wayne And Stunt Like My Daddy Day After Day
I Can Lay Down, Rest A Bit, But I'll Be Back All Energic
After I Blow Up I'll Go Make A Flick
Put This In Ya Mind I Aint No Trick, Trust Me I Aint Gon Lie
Fight Back Eye To Eye
Stay This Way Til The Day I Die
Aint No One Gon See Me Cry

(theres More)


[Chorus]
You People Think U Tough (tough)
People Stay They Ruff (Ruff)
In The City Where Im From You Gotta Show Ya Stuff (Stuff)
Po-Po Come Po-Po Do, But They Cant Cuff (cuff)
People Tryna Hurt Me, But Im Lke E-Nuff (Nuff) (2x)

[Verse 2]
Dont Mess Wit Me Man
Cuz Ya A** Might Die
Come At Ya Wit My Fist Right In Ya Eye
Dont F*** wit me cuz ima make you cry
U Wanna Kill Me? Go ahead n Try
I Swear I Aint Afaid To Fight You
You Say U Can Kill But You Aint True
I Cant Even Tell Who Tougher, U Or Ya Boo?
Come On You Kno Me I Can Take Ya Whole Crew
Imma Beat You & Take Ya loo'
Or Maybe I'll Swipe The Kicks On Ya Feet
Whateva Its Up To You, Whatcha Want Me To Do?

[chorus]
You People Think U Tough (tough)
People Stay They Ruff (Ruff)
In The City Where Im From You Gotta Show Ya Stuff (Stuff)
Po-Po Come Po-Po Do, But They Cant Cuff (cuff)
People Tryna Hurt Me, But Im Lke E-Nuff (Nuff) (4x)

Answer 1

don listen to dat one guy dat said gurls cant rap bout bein tough....i liked it....it could get on da charts

Answer 2

rap it is rhyme its not. I see a lost soul in hard times trying to make it the gang sticks to together strong person. give me a day or two I could make a rhyme you stick to the rap. Try something different it might go somewhere try bad kid tried hard made it streets bad sorta rap might take you places and use words from all sorta races who know you cold be the new wave... have a good one:-)

Answer 3

Your rhyme is too simple, sticking too close to one syllable style. Get some slam poetry books and learn to stylize your words, your vocabulary and twists within are what make you a poet.

Answer 4

Sorry, don't like Rap and don't like Rap lyrics.
But from what I can read, you did do a nice job.

Answer 5

uh, it needs work. rap about being sexy. people arent really feeling tough girl raps.

Answer 6

Whoa...I'm a hillbilly. But, from what I could understand it was nice!

Answer 7

snoop dogg

Answer 8

kill me just kill me

Answer 9

That's tight. I like it.