Boy meets girl
You were my dream ,my world
But I was blind
You cheated on me from blind
so on my own
I feel so alone though I know it’s true
I’m still in love with you
I need a miracle
I wanna be your girl
Give me a chance to see
that’s you are made for me
I need a miracle
Please let me be your girl
One day you’ll see it can happen to me
It can happen to me
Day and night
I’m always by your side
Cause I know for sure
My love is real my feelings pure
So take a try
No need to ask me why
Cause I know it’s true
I’m still in love with you
I need a miracle…
2006-08-18 12:52:19 · 17 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
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2006-08-18 13:01:05 · update #1
if u wanna here more of my songs just add me
2006-08-18 13:03:57 · update #2
Omgosh!!! I love your song Girl you should become a singer
2006-08-18 12:57:53 · answer #1 · answered by ♥ChErRy~LiPs♥ 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
7
2006-08-18 13:00:08 · answer #2 · answered by ask-ko-lang 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
from a scale from one to 10 i would rate it as a 7-8 the words were good but maybe if u had some music to the song then maybe just maybe it would sound like a 10
2006-08-18 13:05:40 · answer #3 · answered by P00hbAbii 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I rate a 10
2006-08-18 12:58:37 · answer #4 · answered by Shortie1981 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
on a scale 1-10 ill give you a perfect 20!
2006-08-18 12:58:39 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
8-10 gurl tis awesome
2006-08-18 13:19:27 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. 8
My only problem was with:
But I was blind
You cheated on me from blind
Was it suppose to be,
You cheated on me from behind?
Other than that very well done.
2006-08-18 13:00:10 · answer #7 · answered by Carey 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You need to change the third or fourth line----other than that its a good POEM
2006-08-18 12:59:05 · answer #8 · answered by Jane Doe 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
lovely! 10!
2006-08-18 13:00:17 · answer #9 · answered by wondering247 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well... I'll give it a... 7-8, let's say. Good song!
2006-08-18 12:57:29 · answer #10 · answered by danielle 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋