It won't fit fully onto the page so I'll post in halves. It's a song I wrote.
I Need Your Love
Now that you’re gone
All I feel is pain
Tell me what went on
And please don’t refrain
All of the things I’ve said
I wish I could take back
Let’s work it out instead
Baby I need you back
I can’t bare to lose you
I need your love
Everything I will do
We’ll rise above
Can I heal your broken heart?
I never meant to hurt you
I’m sorry I didn’t do my part
It’s about time that I do
2006-08-18 11:52:46 · 14 answers · asked by rm2kdark_lord 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
I can’t bare to lose you
I need your love
Everything I will do
We’ll rise above
Remember our walks
The times we’ve kissed
Our loving talks
All the things I’ve missed
Come back baby
I’m on my knees forever
Come back baby
I want us to be together
I can’t bare to lose you
I need your love
Everything I will do
We’ll rise above
2006-08-18 11:52:56 · update #1
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Thank you for your comments this song is a Rock Ballad. Slow love song type.
2006-08-18 12:02:44 · update #2
As I song writer myself and a musician. I can truly say that, that is a good song. If you're writing it 4 someone dont make any plans 4 the rest of you life cause she'll marry you.
2006-08-18 12:02:49 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like you have a future in song writing to me...
Keep it up and find the right connections to get you on the road.
2006-08-18 11:59:36 · answer #2 · answered by Dolphin lover 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow, that was a really good song!
but wut do u mean by everything i will do we'll rise above?
but it sounds like that realtionship was really personal and those are the best songs, so i think that u have a good start!
and u r doing the right thing by asking ppl if they like ur lyrics....
is this a rock song a punk song or wut?
good luck and i hope i hear this on the radio soon!
2006-08-18 12:02:18 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think your song is really good and I think it is nicely written.
Nice work! Your future looks bright
2006-08-18 12:00:00 · answer #4 · answered by oh-so- Laid-back 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm sold! Now for the music...
P.S. The correct spelling is bear, not bare.
2006-08-18 11:58:51 · answer #5 · answered by blu moon 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think this is an interesting song!! love it. its about a girl and you love her.
2006-08-18 12:02:51 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
what's ur Q? I DON'T really care, but i love ur song, keep riteing and u'll be a star!!!!!!!!
2006-08-18 11:58:47 · answer #7 · answered by v.ballerr <3 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great song...Beautiful....made me cry....what kind of music will you put it to?
2006-08-18 11:59:14 · answer #8 · answered by GeT oUtTa MaH fAcE beOTcH 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it!
2006-08-18 11:59:35 · answer #9 · answered by Alyssa 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow thats awsome.....but i do suggest some metaphors.
2006-08-18 11:58:42 · answer #10 · answered by The Ren 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋