What do you think of this song I wrote?

Question

I wrote this recently and would like some feedback. It is upbeat and dancey with piano and a few vocals. Let me know what you think. Thanks!

http://www.rayza.net/misc/music/Rayza_-_The_Lightship.mp3

Answer 1

I am currently listening to it, and love it! I'd LOVE to have this in my dance collection! I'm about halfway through it, and so far I think the beat is great, the vocals fit, and the changes are terrific!

This is a great dance tune! Keep up the awesome work, and PLEASE let me know if you write anything else! You have talent!

Answer 2

its takes a lot of time even with a broadband connection but good