the story is about a man who has bioploar diease and sometimes he doesn' t notice it, Ricky Marvin, 26 years of age, business man,
single faher, his bipolar diease drives him to do crazy things sicehe is so obssessed with hollywood (celebrities, movies)
each time he is on the road everything around him seems to be a movie scene and many times he wil take a familiar movie scene and perform in the real world, its like his body and soul are in the real world but his head are in the clouds, he's stuck in the fantasy world of hollywood, meanwhile his family worrie for him are getting him help to put his feet on the ground if you know what ia mean.
his sister lorena Marvin married and mother of 2 kids, her father and husband are the ones caring for Ricky and now they must find him help and the only person that ca hep mRicky is a Psyhcologist Dr. Jerry Nelson a a father of 3 whop lost his wife 10 months ago in an accident. Can the doc help Ricky before this diease gets really outta range
2006-08-18 01:10:21 · 6 answers · asked by garnessilva 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Good ideas here. Please do more research on bipolar disorders. A psychologist could help Ricky (why such a young name for an adult) but a psychiatrist would prescribe medication, which is what he would need first of all. Keep writing, but do your research, the experts would tear this theory all apart, I'm afraid. You have a good start. Good Luck!
2006-08-18 01:17:59 · answer #1 · answered by Barbara 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Well, the main thing you should do before writing this is research bipolar disease a bit more. Get a feel for the symptoms and behaviors of people who have this disease so you can make Ricky as believable as possible. Also, think about your conflict and basic plot. Are you going to have this in the perspective of the doctor or Ricky? Is the main story going to be around Ricky healing or his movie fantasies? Consider points of view, and what kind of climax you're heading towards as well: will he start to get better or not? Once you have a basic "plot map" in mind, just start writing and go with what you feel in the story, regardless of what people say. Good luck writing!!
2006-08-18 13:10:51 · answer #2 · answered by risingphoenix421 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Before you write, buy some books on how to write a book. Take some classes. Perfect your English. Good storyline idea. I'll say about a 7. How old are you? Just curious.
2006-08-18 08:18:57 · answer #3 · answered by Kristen H 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Good plot, but actually it's not enough. Great books are grate due to the style of writing. There are plenty of books about Romeo and Juliette, but only Shakespeare is considered to be genius. Think about that
2006-08-18 09:48:15 · answer #4 · answered by Maria K 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If I were you I would get some English lessons before you consider writing anything. Is this an autobiogrophy.
2006-08-18 08:16:45 · answer #5 · answered by sharon m 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It sounds like Ricky may have schizophrenia.
2006-08-18 08:45:34 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋