HELP!!! can you help me w/ my thesis(english paper)?

Question

so i'm writing about hobbies. i don't have much mistakes accept that my teacher says that i need the thesis after the opening paragraph. i don't know what to write. my english classes in the previous grade wasn't that difficult. now this one is.
what should i put for my thesis? it's about hobbies.

Answer 1

The dictionary defines a thesis as: a thorough, written presentation of an original point of view. A thesis statement generally consists of two parts: your topic, and then the analysis, explanation(s), or assertion(s) that you're making about the topic. The kind of thesis statement you write will depend on what kind of paper you're writing. A thesis statement is a very specific statement -- it should cover only what you want to discuss in your paper, and be supported with specific evidence. The scope of your paper will be determined by the length of your paper and any other requirements that might be in place. Generally, a thesis statement appears at the end of the first paragraph of an essay, so that readers will have a clear idea of what to expect as they read. You can think of your thesis as a map or a guide both for yourself and your audience, so it might be helpful to draw a chart or picture of your ideas and how they're connected to help you get started. You probably need an expository thesis statement.

Example: The lifestyles of barn owls include hunting for insects and animals, building nests, and raising their young.

A reader who encountered that thesis would expect the paper to explain how barn owls hunt for insects, build nests, and raise young.

Since your writing about hobbies, tell the reader what hobbies are, and what type of hobbies you are writing about. Possibly how to get started on a hobbies and the resources available to research a hobby.

Answer 2

first, the title...hobbies...then, do the following:

1. Introduction to hobbies...(state your facts about hobbies in this world, state your own hobbies, etc)
2. contents...types of hobbies
3. it should be about why people have hobbies, the benefits of hobbies..
4. give an example of hobbies..maybe your hobbies would fit..tell everything you know about your hobbies...(but not to detail)
5. Conclusion....what you think about hobbies

that's all...good luck!

Answer 3

People have different hobbies that they are passionate about and enjoy doing.

Answer 4

Of the abundant amount of hobbies out there I like these ____ ____ ___ the best.

Simple.

Answer 5

What have you written about so far? I would use the direction taken with what you have already written.

Answer 6

I dont know, but you need someone to check your grammer VERY closely.