What do you think of this?

Question

Poem I wrote...

Standing Tall

You are standing;
Standing tall.
But while you are upright,
You drift from conformity.
As you walk your path of individualism,
We linger your tracks.
You set the tone of independence,
And we pursue that goal.
When you consciously pass;
Walking tall,
Jealousy shadows us.
But our envy is trounced by your passion.
You shed light on those who are concealed in darkness.
You bestow love upon those who are secluded.
You elate the forlorn,
And befriend the foes.
But above all,
You stand tall.
You drift from conformity.

Answer 1

i really liked this, but it made me a bit jealous. i try not to follow the crowd but it really does take people with a great amount of self confidence and a deaf ear to completely leave conformity behind. At least in high school.. but yes, anyways (got off topic..) i like your poem, its pretty and tells a story.

Answer 2

better than most poems I see here

but this is a bad forum to get feedback on your poems
you cannot get a true answer here, people only look for 4 seconds and give a snap judgement without reading it

Answer 3

Very inspiring and not full of cliches like some poems I've read. And it actually says something important. Very nice.

Answer 4

It is really good. Makes me want to listen to : Wont back down : Tom Petty. Good luck.

Answer 5

Pretty decent! I like to write, too! Good luck!

Answer 6

Pretty good

Answer 7

deep thats deep you should publish tat with some
others

Answer 8

Very thought provoking and deep...nice!

Answer 9

i like it... im a fellow poet, if you wanna read one of mine.. go to my profile and im me or email me.. cya later

Answer 10

it's not very lyrical but it's pretty good.