She sucks do you think so?
You are the one who messed up my life
Who cut right through me jus like a knife
And now i pretend everything's okay just to scare the pain away
Now everytime I see your face it kills me even more
To think I wasted all those precious years on you
2006-08-17 08:31:02 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
I wrote them. I mean to say *I suck lol this is my first song ever.
2006-08-17 08:39:54 · update #1
Anger inspires~ Alannis Morrisette made a mint on it.
Be clever- this is so junior high!
Good luck- don't loose the anger- try again.
If you really want to write a poem/song, then really do it.
2006-08-17 08:45:58 · answer #1 · answered by Denise W 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sturdy for you. do no longer end your music profession. you will stay effective in case you do no longer supply up writing songs. Your first music is sturdy, even though it desires a melody to be thoroughly sturdy, and to be thoroughly a music. take a seat at your piano and enable your hands do the enjoying. do no longer concern with reference to the blunders. you will get greater clever that way. Your lyrics would desire to alter, yet you look to understand love adequate to start with a theory. it rather is all you may desire to begin writing songs, as long as you're brave. blunders do no longer count, no count the style you sense approximately them, and no count what all and sundry would desire to declare approximately you or your blunders. have exciting!
2016-09-29 09:19:52 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it! Sounds appropriate for my life right now!
2006-08-17 08:39:45 · answer #3 · answered by Dani California 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No sorry, they way i was singing it i didnt like it. however im sure your tune is different than my tune and music is all about the music not the singing, so it might come out ok
2006-08-17 08:37:57 · answer #4 · answered by the_falcon_1987 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
who sings it??
i think they are very good=]
specaily with twhat kind of music it out today
2006-08-17 08:37:22 · answer #5 · answered by Carrie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
weak lyrics
2006-08-17 08:37:42 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I actually think they're pretty good. What are they from?
2006-08-17 08:37:22 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
not to my taste - I rate them pretty poorly
2006-08-17 08:37:28 · answer #8 · answered by ladyjailbird424 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty weak
2006-08-17 08:35:24 · answer #9 · answered by chavito 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
SUCKS!!
2006-08-17 08:43:50 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋