Life goes by so quickly,
We must live it.
Before we discover it has passed through our fingertips,
Then it will be too late to live and love and learn.
Life is a speeding road,
We have to just enjoy the ride.
Because when it stops,
We travel into the unknown.
We only live once,
Why not live like you want to?
Your last day could be today,
Even though we pray to God it isn't.
With life, you never know,
Live and be happy, and you will grasp life.
Instead of letting it just drift on by,
And having no time to live and to love and to learn.
I made the first stanza up a few days ago and finished it just now. What do you think?
2006-08-17 05:54:41 · 16 answers · asked by ~S~ is for Stephanie! 6 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
its good! i mean, its interesting...makes you reflect doesnt it?
nice one.
2006-08-17 06:06:00 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great job! It's got a catchy beat but a few too many "to"s, particularly in the last two stanzas. Still, I give it an 87 out of 100!
2006-08-17 13:01:17 · answer #2 · answered by ensign183 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes! You answered to my question with the first 4 verses.
2006-08-17 13:14:32 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Omg!!! you made that on the tip of your head????? That is brilliant! If you turn that in as homework when its suppose to be math I would give you an A+++++++++ !!!
2006-08-17 13:00:46 · answer #4 · answered by carecherl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like your poem it show a lot of imagery.
Keep up the good work.
2006-08-17 15:02:57 · answer #5 · answered by Tori 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love poetry and i don't believe there is any bad poetry, as long as it has feeling in it. Good job!
2006-08-17 14:35:30 · answer #6 · answered by Freedom 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ya the poem was gud in its concept and meaning. but , frankly speaking, it lacks the poetic element, somehow.
but, gud job, keep going.
2006-08-17 13:52:45 · answer #7 · answered by chaitu 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Really Good! I liked it! Good job!
2006-08-17 14:58:42 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes, I like it.
2006-08-17 13:00:26 · answer #9 · answered by shirley_corsini 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Life is extremely short... but it's what we get.... so don't regret your life. Your poem is cool.
2006-08-17 13:00:22 · answer #10 · answered by shelsi 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its good
2006-08-17 13:01:57 · answer #11 · answered by La Diabla 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋