And if I could pass into another existence,
Bright with blood and dark with death
I would to go by razor,
Body christened with the glistening of tears
The throbbing of scars pulsating with a universal emptiness
Bath water swirling pink, cloudy tendrils
Signifying passage from this world to the next
And if I could pass into another existence
then I would to die tonight.
2006-08-17 05:12:27 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Social Science ➔ Psychology
Well. Well. I guess you could.
2006-08-17 08:27:54 · answer #1 · answered by The Bell Jar 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Fill the void with love and light and you will feel no need for the darkened passages narrowing before you
Give yourself hope live a dream but not one of dark and gloom
God Bless you, sending lots of love and hugs your way, you are never alone
xxxx
2006-08-17 12:24:57 · answer #2 · answered by WW 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Now try to do something difficult. Find something beautiful in life, instead of death. We all know death is beautiful and poetic. But a real writer finds beauty where others dont.
That would be art.
That would impress us.
2006-08-17 12:35:50 · answer #3 · answered by Blonda 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pay no attention to these other answers; I think the poem's beautiful. I just hope you're not planning to commit suicide tonight or anything.
2006-08-17 12:21:43 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Why are you writing poems about suicide, Honey this world is dark and hateful enough. What do you thing hell will be like?
2006-08-17 12:19:02 · answer #5 · answered by t4king 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i feel that you are deeply depressed and having thoughts that are serious, and i pray that you are looking for help..........in your city and county there is a stress hotline waiting for you to call and talk to someone..do it .... life is precious and you deserve to enjoy your life.
call for help now or go to the hospital and tell them you need to talk to someone and take this poem with you
2006-08-17 12:22:13 · answer #6 · answered by walterknowsall 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Please lighten up:
Resume by Dorothy Parker
Razors pain you;
Rivers are damp;
Acids stain you;
And drugs cause cramp.
Guns aren’t lawful;
Nooses give;
Gas smells awful;
You might as well live.
2006-08-17 12:19:18 · answer #7 · answered by johnslat 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
U must be High on sumthin'
2006-08-17 12:18:04 · answer #8 · answered by Queen B ZN 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It takes too long; too much time to think.
2006-08-17 12:22:28 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good , you got talent if you wrote it.
2006-08-17 12:18:46 · answer #10 · answered by Willie H 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋