Hey, my name is Stevenson, and i'm from NYC. I enjoy writing stories.. I just finish writing a short story and i wanted to know if anyone wanted to read it. If so, leave your email address and i'll send it to you. Thank you, and here's a brief summary of the story
Joey: A 16 year old kid with the thought of mind of Holden Caulfield and the slick mouth of any lonely teenager searching for acceptance. After Joey’s mom hits the lottery they move to Laguna Beach, California, or as Joey would say: “the place where Satan’s children reside”. While enjoying the Laguna Beach party life, Joey needs more, so he convinces his mom to send him to Africa: “To find the meaning of life and all”. While rooming at J.Danjis: A boarding school in Africa, Joey meets some questionable people and teachers who are sure to map out the real question of why Joey is so angry at the world. Taking a page out of J.D Salinger’s: Catcher in the Rye writing style and the sleek references to pop culture. He never heard her whisper is a sure bet when it comes to adolescence and rebellion.
2006-08-17 04:03:21 · 5 answers · asked by Stevenson J 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
The plotline definitely is interesting, i can understand Joey's need to leave the glittery falseness of the indulgent Laguna Beach elite. Going to Africa provides the contrast needed to the give the story interest and drama, hopefully there his mentors provide the nectar needed to quench his rebellious thirst.
2006-08-18 16:27:48 · answer #1 · answered by sunshine25 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nonononono i do no longer decide to envision that e book! that sounds uninteresting. Why the stop in Laguna coastline anyhow? Why no longer purely deliver him straight away to africa? or did you will desire to get some LC in there? i do no longer decide to envision that tale nooo. Why is rebelling anyhow? what's incorrect together with his life? This sounds stupid and too comlicated, with africa and Laguna coastline and stuff. Why does the boarding college would desire to be in Africa? So he can get HIV? Why can't or no longer it relatively is in Massachusets or connecticut or heck even Wyoming. no longer that I also have a topic against africa yet why does it relatively is going to likely be in africa? so nooo do no longer touch me and that i comprehend this became right into a waste of a submit yet who cares you at the instant are not the boos of me biatch!
2016-10-02 04:58:20 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
hey...your story sound interesting..im frm new delhi india id luv to read it...strumitup@yahoo.co.in
2006-08-17 04:51:37 · answer #3 · answered by stormchaser 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's alright.
2006-08-17 11:11:59 · answer #4 · answered by Priscilla 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'd love to.
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2006-08-17 04:09:29 · answer #5 · answered by pollypureheart 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋