"Luna the Moon Priestess" my 3rd poem?

Question

I looked outside to see a star where wishes can come true
In a book i read from 10 to 1 year ago
A girl named Luna the priestess of the moon was are hero
She gave us hope and we lived on day to day
She wore a robe made from the sky
She held a staff given by the moon goddess herself
We prayed to her to give us light and rain
Luna the moon Priestess did it in a day
Her words were smooth as a note could be
The clouds rained down and light appeared in 3
She smiled and went to her temple afar
I smiled and said i love her for she is the moon of us all

this poem was made not today but 1 year ago in a book
i hope you like it.

Answer 1

good poem, but check your spelling and grammar. show it to your english teacher for advice. sometimes it takes a while to "polish" poetry or any other writing.

Answer 2

I like it very much, its so deep.