Well, I like it but, it needs a little bit of work.
Song:
You rock! You rock! You rock!
So You Think You Can Dance
I cry 'cause you win!
Oh, win for me!
Oh, Benji win for me!
Dance:
Twist around
Cartwheel
Twist around
Cartwheel
Shake your body 3x
Twist around
Cartwheel
Shake your body 6x
2006-08-16 10:34:39
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answered by Sk8erboi83 3
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Yeah you can make songs but i dont really think it will be a great it in the country. The words are very takey and i dont think it sounds that good. Sorry Karl
2006-08-16 10:33:09
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answered by Anonymous
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I like the way u write. About the song mmm thats quiet ok too
2006-08-16 10:33:42
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answered by Anonymous
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Think of songs like this... They are poetry with music and a beat. Use these guidelines when you write a song. Make it your own, personal.
2006-08-16 10:38:02
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answered by Anonymous
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uhhhh, hope this isn't your career choice. you'll be very hungry.
other than that, benji is AMAZING!!!!! i think that family got a little too much talent. i mean, benji AND heidi both making to top 4? crazy!
2006-08-16 10:30:43
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answered by lady of the piano 3
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Don't give up the day time job ok. Keep dreaming on there lol
2006-08-16 10:32:09
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answered by Anonymous
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To much of the same words repeated.
2006-08-16 10:30:22
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answered by Z-Cat 5
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mixed feelings, needs more of a beat that defines your song better. its still in the making to me, and its very undefined.
2006-08-16 10:31:25
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answered by DevynFTW 2
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It doesn't float my boat but U never know some1 here may like it!
2006-08-16 10:31:16
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answered by Anonymous
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Please don't sing that in public- or do that dance. I would hate to see you get put away. You know- like in a mental clinic/insane asylum.
2006-08-16 11:33:18
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answered by ♥michele♥ 7
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