Its called the "Lady of the blossoms"
When i lookout of the window i see a tree full of blooms
Smooth of the petals that flow in the wind
I glance upon a girl with Sparkle hair that shines with the sun
Her eyes are Blue as the sea of my heart
Her Face is gentle as the petals could be
Her voice was soft as the Clouds that pass by
I truly love her with my deepest feelings
I lookout again to see the girl i loved
She looked back with a gentle smile
And walked towards her house dancing like a swan.
I believe it and i wont forget
That someday she will return
And we wont be apart for our hearts
Are truly Twined in the trees of blossoms
day: August 15 2006
2006-08-16 09:42:52 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
your a vary deep person and i like that you tell what you think and don't care about what other people think i like this one too it reminds me of the falling petals of tree tthere there and the fal,l only to come back for another season
2006-08-17 11:01:01 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Awesome. And awe inspiring
2006-08-16 16:48:04 · answer #2 · answered by do you smell..... what's coo 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
its pretty good if ur gurl likes that kinda stuff. me- well, no offense, but i dont go for guys that write poems. im more of the motorcycle, saturday nite party kinda gal. but its still cool
2006-08-16 16:49:57 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
aaaaawwww! Lucky girl-wish i was her. Very romantic of you to write her a poem-that is really sweat.
2006-08-16 16:50:04 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
im not gonna lie to you, but it sounds bad. it need a lot of work. no offense but im not going to lie to you. like those others.
2006-08-16 17:09:13 · answer #5 · answered by beautyprincess 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
OMG!! i love poems!!!
This is very romantic....I could show u some of mine 2..
I love it!!! ur a hopeful person, i can tell..
I LOVE IT!!
2006-08-16 16:48:08 · answer #6 · answered by ♥Maria_missing_you♥ 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I really like it. I hope you write some more.
2006-08-16 16:59:10 · answer #7 · answered by doglady 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
thats pretty kick azz
2006-08-16 16:47:23 · answer #8 · answered by Max K 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's pretty good but what are "Blooms"?
2006-08-16 16:47:14 · answer #9 · answered by mrharderson 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good one i really like it.
2006-08-16 16:49:21 · answer #10 · answered by asking??? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋