he's just out for your heart
he's just playin with your head
dont go back to him honey
he'll just do it again
he keeps playin those games
he keeps up with his ways
if he don't straighten up sooon
he won't see no more days
CHOURUS
he's just a foolish boy
jus a messin' with your heart
he's not in it for real love
just a boyfriend playin the part (x2)
boyfriends come and go
and this one sure can't stay
this boy is pure trouble
with a different girl each day
you gotta find a better man
a real keeper this time
cuz the one your lookin' at now
well, he sure aint a dime
he's just a foolish boy
just a messin with your heart
he's not in it for real love
just a boyfriend playin the part (x2)
2006-08-15 22:38:32 · 16 answers · asked by IDNTGIVASHT 6 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
I would have given you 10 full points for the best poem that i have come across in Y Ans. Well done and God bless. Have a great day ahead. Remember : Tomorrow is another day, another hope, yesterday has gone, dead and over, never turn back, never look back, enjoy the present and try to live moment to moment as though it is your last. That is why they say "yesterday is past, today is a present and tomorrow is a surprise".
2006-08-15 22:57:00 · answer #1 · answered by easyboy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ur subject is good but have to improve....
some lines r very cute but some r jus like a sentence.
u jus correct it.
i hope u have a tune 4 this..
go n present it somewhere
2006-08-15 22:55:52 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice work is it going to be a smooth song or rappid fast =D
I Iike fast beet
2006-08-15 22:53:32 · answer #3 · answered by Biathlon Dode 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think the song does not progress from the first verse.
You don't say why he's a fool, you don't say what he's done.
You don't say what your going to do now. No plot or method.
sorry if that sounds harsh.
2006-08-15 22:45:55 · answer #4 · answered by Burnt Emberes 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Seems good to me! and not that you got our opinions I would suggest to delete your question. you don`t want some other person to take your song?! take care
2006-08-15 23:33:18 · answer #5 · answered by Villa 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cool! keep up the good work. The more you do it the easier it becomes...
2006-08-15 22:45:17 · answer #6 · answered by mark2zephyr 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
not bad... It can be sung by a teenage star.. Consider lIndsay Lohan
2006-08-16 00:00:10 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cool. Would like to hear it when it's finished.
2006-08-16 00:42:13 · answer #8 · answered by lakataleadolma 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats tight right there gots ah good lil vibe to it
2006-08-15 22:42:35 · answer #9 · answered by pistolgrip104 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it sounds decent, but don't put your songs on the web, people may just use them for their own purpose.
2006-08-15 22:42:23 · answer #10 · answered by singitoutloudandclear 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋