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2006-08-15 17:33:49 · 10 answers · asked by Shadow 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
There are obviously a bunch of smart a s s es here tonight that didnt even bother to read your poetry before answering to get points.
I love your poetry and feel you are an old soul who has a unique understanding of the human condition at a very tender age. Keep doing what youre doing and I think you will be successful.
Your poetry, some of it reminds me of Rod McKuen. Not sure if I spelled his name right, but look him up.
Good luck to you and God bless.
2006-08-15 18:00:57 · answer #1 · answered by hipichick777 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I wrote better poetry in kindergarten.
You know what, maybe that was a little harsh. You're probably like, what, 13?
Here's some free advice:
1. Pay more attention to the rhythm.
2. Don't rely so much on rhyme.
2006-08-16 00:40:32 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
They seem like you are just talking to someone and you are paying too much attention on rhyming which poetry doesnt really have to do. Keep trying.
2006-08-16 00:52:07 · answer #3 · answered by hechicera_de_la_alma 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice .you improve further in a positive sense.every one would like to .
2006-08-16 00:39:13 · answer #4 · answered by Bhahagyam 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I think that I shall never see
such blatant mediocracy.
2006-08-16 00:37:37 · answer #5 · answered by shazam 6 · 2⤊ 2⤋
Very nice... very creative.
2006-08-16 00:40:13 · answer #6 · answered by Heatmizer 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
they make me feel like Im losing my lunch.
2006-08-16 00:37:21 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
your poems are really good
2006-08-16 00:41:52 · answer #8 · answered by ? 3 · 2⤊ 1⤋
boring i vomit after reading it
2006-08-16 00:42:14 · answer #9 · answered by arveen paria arasuk 6 · 1⤊ 2⤋
they suck!!!!!!!!!!
2006-08-16 00:37:31 · answer #10 · answered by Jumping Jack Flash 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋