The snowy landscape
Is silent to the dark man
As he stares in awe.
Beyond the tall trees
Lies an enchanted castle
That casts a shadow.
The stars that twinkle
Quietly through the vague dusk
Are dreamlike treasures.
2006-08-15 14:44:43 · 4 answers · asked by Ericelephant 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Your haikus are good
Keep on writing poetry
Thanks for sharing them
2006-08-16 03:16:00 · answer #1 · answered by Lee 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I like the last one a lot - vague dusk is a nice phrase
Not so wild about the first two - I got no mental images off of them that were very inspiring.
2006-08-15 16:22:18 · answer #2 · answered by merigold00 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Haikus are easy.
If you can count to seven
you can write haikus
2006-08-15 14:51:17 · answer #3 · answered by HokiePaul 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes, I like it. You did a good job. I can picture it. Thank you for sharing.
2006-08-15 14:52:48 · answer #4 · answered by Ms. G. 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋