Hey, As you asked for the comments I will give my frank comment...
First My congrats for your great work.....
First "http://www.geocities.com/indiansmoney/addesign.gif" is missing.
Second there are more text, Normally users prefers short and sweet.
Use bullets and make the content very brief. If they want to have more details give the link.
Try to add some graphics files, pictures so that the look and feel will be good.
The colour (BG and Text) are not exciting try to give some energetic color.
Headings dont make more than one line...
Hmm Thats all...I am sorry as you asked I have to give my correct opinion not to give fake opinion to make you happy
2006-08-13 17:29:56
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answered by Peter 2
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Your website looks very simple, and not suitable for what you are advertising for. When I first get into your website, I think this website is cheating me. If you can get so much money in a month, why didn't you hire a professional webmaster to create a professional-looking website and maintain your website? one more thing I noticed is that you are using geocities server, which is free and have some ad attached to it. That is really not cool. I mean why did a men who gets a lot of money put his/her website in a free server (especially when they have the annoying ad). It doesn't fit the description. I'm sorry for throwing this hard words, but I guess you are a newbies in making a website. I'm just trying to give you my honest opinion. Don't let yourself down with my comments, use it to lift your spirit up. Browse internet frequently, see how's the real professional's website, learn how to create one, and comeback into this business.
2006-08-13 17:34:38
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answer #2
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answered by Tingkatan3 3
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Honestly it looks like a con job site., its too loud and difficult to believe
2006-08-13 17:48:34
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answer #3
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answered by bash 4
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Hey the site good for marketing your on-line earning program
thanks
http://www.dataconmng.com
2006-08-13 18:22:00
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answered by RAM 3
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Not a right forum to advertise yourself. Just make handbills and get it distributed with newspapers
2006-08-15 07:05:28
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answer #5
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answered by Mantu S 2
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Dear Dexter this is not a place to advertise ! Choose right forum !
2006-08-14 20:33:05
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answered by shri 6
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CONGRATULATIONS &
BEST OF LUCK
I liked your project started with optimism.
2006-08-13 18:36:53
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answer #7
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answered by PK LAMBA 6
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it is difficult to believe
2006-08-15 19:42:34
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answered by Anonymous
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havn't hecked yet
2006-08-13 17:30:20
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answered by jass 3
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sorry but no*********
2006-08-17 04:48:03
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answered by Anonymous
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