The sentence "A pillar standing tall and erect symbolizing the strong foundation. A concept of blue elicit a simple yet elegant sense surrounding the area.Behind the transparency design, it has clearly revealed a life philosophy, which also assent the architectural design in exhibiting virtue of aptitude development to an unlimited extent." Is there anything wrong with this sentence? Need help for my school project. please amend to the BEST you can, 10 points!!! thanks.
2006-08-12 19:21:15 · 4 answers · asked by Delight4eva 1 in Business & Finance ➔ Advertising & Marketing
I'm not quite sure what you are trying to say, especially in the last sentence. Here it goes anyway:
A majestic pillar rises tall from its strong foundation. An area awash with blue elicits a simple but elegant feeling. Through its transparent design shines a life philosophy, where from architectural brilliance flows the development of limitless possibilities.
2006-08-12 19:50:58 · answer #1 · answered by Mr.Noobler 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"A pillar standing tall and erect symbolizing the strong foundation. A concept of blue elicit a simple yet elegant sense surrounding the area.Behind the transparency design, it has clearly revealed a life philosophy, which also assent the architectural design in exhibiting virtue of aptitude development to an unlimited extent."
"A pillar standing tall and erect symbolizes the strong foundation. A concept of blue elicits a simple yet elegant sense surrounding the area. Behind the transparent design, it has clearly revealed a life philosophy, which also assented the architectural design in exhibiting a virtue of aptitude development to an unlimited extent."
2006-08-12 19:33:09 · answer #2 · answered by ♥ jojo ♥ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Item. It's several sentences.
A pillar, standing tall and erect, symbolizing the strong foundation. A concept of blue (I have no idea hat that's meant to man) elicits a simple yet elegant sense (of what) surrounding the area. Behind the transparent (or is their some sort of slide show going on that I don't know about) it has clearly revealed a life philosophy which also assists the architectural design in....and, after that, I'm sorry, it's gibberish. I don't know what you think that expresses, but it doesn't. Unless I know what you want to say, I can't help you say it.
2006-08-12 19:32:02 · answer #3 · answered by scotsman 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good sentences,but I prefer sound like this.......
A pillar is standing still and erect the symbol of symbolise foundation.A true blue concept is eliciting the simple and elegant senses which are surrounding the pillar environment.Behind the unique tranparent designs,obviously revealed the mystery of life philosophy,which also relevant to the achitectural design in extending of virtue in aptitude development to unlimited.
I hope you like it
2006-08-12 20:28:15 · answer #4 · answered by aiktongtan1974 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋