The sentence "A pillar standing tall and erect symbolizing the strong foundation. A concept of blue elicit a simple yet elegant sense surrounding the area.Behind the transparency design, it has clearly revealed a life philosophy, which also assent the architectural design in exhibiting virtue of aptitude development to an unlimited extent." Is there anything wrong with this sentence? Need help for my school project. please amend to the BEST you can, 10 points!!! thanks.
2006-08-12 19:19:33 · 11 answers · asked by Delight4eva 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Trivia
There is more than one sentence. And there is more than one mistake.
2006-08-12 19:21:53 · answer #1 · answered by Gestalt 6 · 3⤊ 0⤋
A pillar standing tall and erect symbolizes the strong foundation. The blue elicits a simple, yet elegant, sense surrounding the area. A life philosophy is clearly revealed behind the transparent design. The architectural design is assented by exhibiting the unlimited extent of aptitude development.
2006-08-12 21:37:33 · answer #2 · answered by uranus2mars 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Besides the fact that it makes no sense and is more than one sentence, try this:
A pillar, standing tall and erect, symbolizes the strong foundation. It's a concept of blue elicit, a simple yet elegant sense surrounding the area. Behind the transparent design, a life philosophy is revealed. It assents the architectural design in exhibiting virtue of aptitude development to an unlimited extent.
2006-08-12 19:32:21 · answer #3 · answered by Truthful 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Try this:
A pillar stands tall and erect, symbolizing a strong foundation. Its blue elicits a sense of simple elegance that pervades the area. In this designed is clearly revealed a philosophy of life and architecture that prizes unlimited development of ability.
2006-08-12 19:27:59 · answer #4 · answered by Sasha 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
No nothing is wrong,and i am not telling u a lie just for the ten points,i am serious.The english used here is good...But only one thing,insted of useing the word "symbolizing" u should use the word "symbolizes".
2006-08-15 05:38:54 · answer #5 · answered by sulaiman s 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a freakin' mess. It never should have been written in the first place
2006-08-12 22:48:23 · answer #6 · answered by jeninsocal 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wrong, all wrong.
But, in order the get a better critique, have someone proof read the entire paper.
2006-08-12 19:30:59 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
There's a lot wrong with all those sentences.
2006-08-12 19:26:19 · answer #8 · answered by rebekkah hot as the sun 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Which sentence?
2006-08-12 19:27:38 · answer #9 · answered by Horndog 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
istead of using symbolizing it will come symbolizes
2006-08-12 19:25:52 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋