I am an aspiring author, and am wondering if a couple people could read and give me feedback about the first few chapters of my book.
2006-08-12 15:10:16 · 23 answers · asked by The_Q. 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Is there anyone who would read the first few chappters of my book and give me honest feed back. It is Action, but is bit violent in some areas. Answer with descrecion.
2006-08-12 15:22:07 · update #1
what's it about?
if it's sweet. i will
2006-08-12 15:12:25 · answer #1 · answered by Kitten 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I would consider it. I would need to know more about it. For example, is it a genre novel? If yes, which genre? And what title are you giving your book? Also, I probably would want to start out just reading about 5 pages. If that is good, I might be willing to read more. In any case, I would you my opinion as to whether you have a story that people would like to read.
2006-08-12 15:16:10 · answer #2 · answered by TrueAim 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Before throwing caution to the wind and sending out your work to the "untrained eyes" you should really join a writers' group. There are several good ones on MSN and Yahoo. These are people who write consistently and can give you good, honest, but most importantly, informed feedback. I worry for young writers who post their soul on boards like these and get tramped on by people who post dribble. Most young people don't have the self confidence yet to handle this type of useless criticism.
2006-08-12 17:31:53 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hi. I was writing, but I don't have the time to do that now, because of my daily job. You should let the book "dump" for a while. Two to six months will do, before you read it yourself, like it was a new story, even to your own eyes. After that you can "get it out" and show others. Premature judgements and opinions will cloud your own talents and taste. It may also make you don't want to write anymore.
2006-08-12 15:19:03 · answer #4 · answered by Alberth Chen 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
email it to me at bigredmoose at yahoo dot com. I'd be happy to read it and give honest feedback. I am very well read, I usually have 2 or books on the go at once. I think I would make a good critic.
2006-08-12 15:12:59 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am an avid reader and getting very bored with the offerings on the shelves!
I am willing to read your chapters. I will tell you that I notice little things that are repetitive and/or just not right for the story. I will be brutal!
2006-08-12 15:20:16 · answer #6 · answered by LN has3 zjc 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you could have given the genre, the length of the chapters by word count, and a little about the plot people could give better replies.
I don't mind reading it (I think).
2006-08-12 15:21:47 · answer #7 · answered by Guitarpicker 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You cant study it in case you at the instant are not interested in it. attempt observing the action picture and then study the 1st couple chapters. The action picture can help get you contained in the marvelous approach and help positioned a face on new characters that are presented besides as giving them a voice. in case you dont decide directly to observe the action picture, watch the final one earlier it, basically to get you contained in the marvelous approach.
2016-09-29 05:12:51 · answer #8 · answered by hobin 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, i am finishing my first Novel this November. Anyway, i strive to read books. I would love if you give me the privilege to read your book.
Good Luck anyway.
2006-08-12 16:25:28 · answer #9 · answered by Sky Star 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What's the genre? I enjoy reading, but technical manuals and romance novels bore the crap out of me.
2006-08-12 15:12:56 · answer #10 · answered by 35 and loving it! 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Couldn't say without knowing more about it. Certain types of books just bore the hell out of me..
2006-08-12 15:17:16 · answer #11 · answered by Elminster 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋