Okay here's a Poem that I made!!!
Tell me what ya think about it!!
"CRUSH"
You were here
You were there
But to me you were everywhere
See these feeling's
Yes it's true
All this feeling's are for you
I hate to feel this way
It's hard for me to find
The right words to say
It hurts me to see
When your not with me
but what can I do?
I have a crush on you
I wish it weren't true
I see you everyday
Your the kind that play's
ugh...
Your get me so mad
And you hurt me so bad
You make me feel ugly
You make me feel lonly
Everytime I see you
I see something untrue
what I see is
Your Laugh
Your Smile
Your Face
your life...
You make worth while
Your so cute
But why havn't you noticed me?
How long will it take?
I'll change anything for you
I'll do anything for you
Cuz for you...
Crazy thing's I'll do
2006-08-12 09:49:33 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
Aww that's a cute one. And long.
2006-08-12 09:52:53 · answer #1 · answered by Romaneasca 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yeah, it's nice. A little juvenile, but I guess you are a bit young. Right?
2006-08-12 09:56:49 · answer #2 · answered by UVRay 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good one-- I like the last line.
2006-08-12 09:56:21 · answer #3 · answered by just julie 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
yea..it's true
and it fits the desciption
nic word
2006-08-12 09:55:52 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋