Post Your Poems?

Question

In this thread just post one of your poems that you wrote for everyone to see :-)

I wrote this one along time ago and posted it in a forum somewhere...

Vengence

Rain drops dripping off your face,
All alone now, you've been disgraced,
I think at how they laughted to,
A clenched fist, they've angered you,
Your heat has melted away the rain,
They will be sorry when they come again,
Vengence, anger, hate and rue,
Those guys, oh how they lament you,
But you dont care,
You think as you stand and stare,
What a laughing stock they made of you.

But nows the time for vengence had,
Your will is strong, your mind's gone bad,
The bat is red, the deed is done,
Vengence had, at everyone,
Look whos laughing, look whose the fool,
Your in jail now, the jokes on you.

Answer 1

i like yours!!! It teaches a good lesson and i like the ending!!!!

Heres my attempt......

I’ll mail your letter today.
Before the ink smears,
And the words waste away.
The message is clear,
And the thought has a meaning,
Even though I wrote it last year.
When you are gone,
And you are out on your own,
Feeling alien and withdrawn.
You can count on me,
To send you a letter,
But forgotten it lies on the counter

Answer 2

Light, the apex of the universe, mixed with thought and time. It takes residence in our mind. The prehistoric ooze from which we came reverberates with the energy of the heavens. Yet we are just a pinprick, on a Billion mile Timeline.

Answer 3

smoking sir?
not me sir
ive never smoked
in my life sir!

smoking sir not
me sir
i cannot stand the smell

smoking sir
not me sir
i dont feel very well

smoking sir , ok sir, ok

i'll lend you a bloody cig


i wrote this thirty one years ago and put on the school notice board regards LF

Answer 4

For some of my poems...refer to the my Q&A...they're all there.