And there’s a bird…
It flies…
Like a kite…
Like a nerd.
That you threw.
Your so mean.
Like Mr. Green
So get a clue
And discover,
The niceness in you.
I wrote this because I am just so tired of people being cruel. I am such a darn nice person and people just continue to, well not be nice back. Gee whiz what does it take these darn days to get a decent friend?????
2006-08-11 10:27:55 · 16 answers · asked by me 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
i like it
2006-08-11 10:30:09 · answer #1 · answered by idontkno 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cool, Nice,
nice rhyming words,
but I think, you are trying to say something here.
I dont know but I think you are comparing the BIRD in this poem to a HEART.
nice one, making someone get charged up, if he reads this deeply.
I cant imagin u r tired, u seems to be filled with an enthusiasm, the world is cruel, so do I, and so do you too. If u r not, make yourself, but dont show cruelty to innocents.
;)
hope this answers you,
see ya,
and do take very good care of yourself.
(and btw, after a long time I have read a poem which touches the mind)
2006-08-11 17:54:29 · answer #2 · answered by K.A.G.S. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I know so well what you mean. "Discover the niceness in you..." is very deep, and the key to turning things around these days. People are cruel today because everything we see in the media says "discover the cruelty in you" - barking back with "discover the niceness in you" is really all the firepower we have. I di it, too, though in other ways (I make people feel like they haven't said everything they wanted to say yet, and then kind of nuge them into being nice as they try to finish, often by saying something incredibly nice to them, like a compliment or other praise). Keep up the good work! Somebody's got to.
2006-08-11 17:37:09 · answer #3 · answered by Tahini Classic 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well if your tired of people being mean then maybe i shouldn't comment on it. Nice gets you no where and people will continue to walk all over you if you don't step up. Friends (Girls especially) will make it hard for you with their catty ways. I'm telling this for you own good, but back to the poem... ahhh i don't think the words flow very nicely.
2006-08-11 17:37:16 · answer #4 · answered by lovegwen4 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
if you want a contructive truthful anwser, here it is. seems i am being honered
in vegas this year for poet of the year by the "INTERNATIONAL POET SOCIETY", i think if you are still in school you need to take soom creative
writing classes. i understand your poem, and a poem come from a deep personal feeling, and is writtin in such a way, that all who reads its should
get your personal concept, yet theres to. what i mean is , that , anyone who
who reads it, should get there own perception of it.
2006-08-11 17:39:43 · answer #5 · answered by jwarning89@sbcglobal.net 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I see your beauty beam across the web like a lighthouse a guide throw dangerous seas or like an angel looking over me in my hour of need, in this cruel world we fear, its hard tell friend from enemy, you are so far but so near the light beaming at me, nothing can be compared to the true nature of your beauty beaming at me in this dangerous ocean we called earth.
2006-08-11 18:20:45 · answer #6 · answered by Redbull 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes ,you are correct in everyway..You just might say you hit the nail on the head !!Nice people these days are real hard to come by now a days....
2006-08-11 17:41:49 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I see exactly what your talking about! And I feel the same way! It sucks that their so mean, but there's not much we can do about it...I think the poem is elementary-isk... I write too! Maybe I can let you read some of mine sometime!
2006-08-11 17:35:07 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's cool
2006-08-11 17:31:12 · answer #9 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You say your thinking it is genius! Thinking? With what?
2006-08-11 17:34:46 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋