Love is the smile that shines within my heart
I'm missing you like crazy when we're apart
You give me strength and hope day by day
I write everything I love about you in an essay
Through the highs and lows in life I have you
We'll laugh and cry together and remain true
Seeing you smile, hearing you laugh is my goal
I want to be perfect the way you keep me whole
8 letters, 3 words, I promise till death to us part
I'm loving you each day like I did at the very start
Our hearts intertwined as we connected as one
From that moment, our love story had begun
You touched my heart and you opened my eyes
You made me smile and wiped away my cries
The meaning of happiness I saw in your smile
I want you to be standing at the end of the aisle
You showed me the world and made me realize
I no longer had to hide or even live in disguise
You're the one I admire and want forever here
I love having you close whenever you are near
So I thank you for everything that you've done
Till the end of fore
2006-08-10 15:55:02 · 17 answers · asked by ♥Mz.Top Notch♥ 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
Wow that was very passionate with true heart your words are humming with honey, even i am a poet but that was a sincere poem i applaud you
you know that poem is all i wanted i dont need the 2 points your poem was enough
2006-08-10 16:05:07 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Honestly, that depends somewhat on your age. If you're older than 13, then you better have some excuse, because it's not all that great. I could write better when I was like 12, so I guess eevrybody's different. Either way, I don't like it to be perfectly honest with you. Sorry, i just don't.
2006-08-10 22:59:39 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I love this poem. I think that it paints the perfect picture of true love and that is something that everyone looks for. That is why I love this poem.
2006-08-10 23:21:37 · answer #3 · answered by J-Bird 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It really seems you are in love with someone. It's a good poem. I have written poetry to. If you write alot of poetry you can send some in and have them published. Good luck on your poetry.
2006-08-10 23:26:16 · answer #4 · answered by Christy H 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You did a good job. Why because you telling someone how you feel and I wish one day I'll find a love like that.
2006-08-10 23:10:31 · answer #5 · answered by deeqt16 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The last stanza realy drops you to the knees. Get rid of it. Honesty...............So I thank you for everything that you've done
Till the end of fore
2006-08-10 23:03:22 · answer #6 · answered by Teacher 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its a good poem and who ever your writing it for must have done something incredible for your life.
2006-08-10 22:59:40 · answer #7 · answered by The Chief 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ya, the poem is sweet. I like it because its written beautifully.
2006-08-10 22:59:57 · answer #8 · answered by T-Jay 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it I think it was beautiful, because it is so true when it comes to that one person that you truly love!
2006-08-10 23:00:17 · answer #9 · answered by chrissiewild79 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's ok...........the rhyming phrases are too long......you need to shorten each line up a little bit but other than that it's pretty good.........also it needs to be more flowing
2006-08-10 23:05:35 · answer #10 · answered by Virginia 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋