Not Easy
How hard is it to love someone?
You tell me, huh! Huh!
All the faces that I see catches my eyes
And how am I going to choose if
If I love them all?
Love is not easy to show
Such small word that can conquer a whole kingdom
Hearing it makes the world rumble
And the heavens to uncover
Your laugh is sweet to look
All I can only do is stare at you
I’m not obsess with, you know
Not that foolish to do such thing
Just that my heart is directed to you
Oh! Gosh, how easy are you to get
So simple than mathematics and science
Easier than deciphering a secret code
But yourself you make it hard for me
To try and love you
2006-08-10 05:11:22 · 5 answers · asked by C-Man 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
i like it you are certainly talented. keep up the good work. maybe you would like to post it on poetrypoem.com it is free. thanks for sharing...
2006-08-10 05:20:35 · answer #1 · answered by lidipiwi 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like the poem but it needs some work .It needs more words to descride on how you feel a little more.The huh huh really needs to go try adding something different to desribe how your feeling.
2006-08-10 05:24:07 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it.... cept it wouldnt hurt 2 leave out the "Huh! Huh!" in line 2
2006-08-10 05:15:46 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very Nice!
2006-08-10 05:29:49 · answer #4 · answered by mrs_herman452 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wtf it sux
2006-08-10 05:24:16 · answer #5 · answered by me && myself 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋