In this other world (with mages and stuff), this princess got bitten by this bug with a fatal disease. This chemist (potions elixers etc) is asigned to get the ingredients for the cure but it has to be quick because if he takes too long the princess will then die. So they pick this young SpellCasting Witch (who was arrested of murder but in 3 years she got freed for good behavior) to help them. The chemist did not trust the witch at first but they got along knowing that if they take too long, the princess will die, and everyone in that world (or atleast who know the princess) trusts them. So how long will it take for the 2 to save the princess with the cure? The adventure goes on....
2006-08-09 20:43:48 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
I know its long but oh well!! Hopefully some people will understand like the girl in the 3rd question. Thanks for the motivation :D
2006-08-09 20:51:34 · update #1
There IS gonna be some twists. Just that I just dont put it cuz its gonna be too long. And yea, I might change the princess to some ordinary person but still the disease is contagious. Once again,,, THANK YOU GUYS FOR THE FEEDBACK!
2006-08-09 20:56:24 · update #2
Cantata person, can i use your idea or anything like it??
Thanks if i can or cant
2006-08-09 21:11:45 · update #3
i think that that story has been written a hundred types.
it's like following a certain archetype...
where's the conflict?
i think the princess is very much too common and the other two characters are common too but with few variations (e.g. the witch is sometimes a rogue and the chemist is an alchemist)
i don't see anything original with it though
2006-08-09 20:52:49 · answer #1 · answered by Hobo_Hippie 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty original. I think there needs to be some excitment in between here and there to keep people interested. Maybe a "sick twist", where the princess was the cause of the witch's imprisonment, and when she got out, she happens to be the only one who could conjure a cure for the princess. Just a simple example.
2006-08-10 03:53:54 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think that sounds great! I love fantasy stories takes me to a new place so i dont have to think about boring life lol. Good Luck!
2006-08-10 04:49:33 · answer #3 · answered by Babydoll 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hi, sounds great just keep working on it remember that there is no end to your imagination and anything that could be unrealistic in life can happen in your story That we you can go on the adventure as you write it, rhink about what you would want to happen or how it should happen..
2006-08-10 04:10:18 · answer #4 · answered by Maritza S 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it! I think it's a good idea to write a fantasy story, because all the posiblilities are endless, and you have no limitations, you know? Have fun writing your story! =)
2006-08-10 03:50:24 · answer #5 · answered by Dolly 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I have no clue if the main idea is good. I can't understand a word of this.
2006-08-10 03:49:14 · answer #6 · answered by Fall Down Laughing 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't like it. But, that may just be me. I don't like this sort of stuff in general. I say write it anyway. :)
2006-08-10 03:50:11 · answer #7 · answered by sam 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋