Running, flying across the pavement
and as i pass the leaves lament
the summers ending, fall is coming
I'm running out of time!
Brown and Orange the leaves grow dark
and in the distance i hear dogs bark
the summers ending, fall is coming
I'm running out of time!
Time to think and time to do,
all the things i want with you
Time to love and time to give,
we may not have much time to live
But with more time that we are given
we can at least be always driven
To pass the test,
and be the best,
The best in you and me!
Snow and Ice begin to melt
the cheer of christmas has been felt
The winters ending, falls still coming
but now i have more time!
Sleds and lights are packed away
and singing bluebirds seem to say
The winters ending, falls still coming
but now you have more time!
More time to think, more time to do
more things i want to do with you
More time to love, more time to give
we have much more time to live!
But with more time that we are given
we can at least be doubly driven
to pass the test
and be the best
The best in you and me!!
But still you ask for more and more
instead of what the time is for
but maybe after you hear this song
A year's time won't be so long
won't be so short
but just.........
Enough time to think and do
all the things i want with you
Enough time to love and give
we have enough time to live
but with the time that we are given
we can atleast be always driven
to pass the test
and be the best
The best in you and me!!!
2006-08-09 13:57:59 · 16 answers · asked by Yoda 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
i love this it sounds more like a love poem but its great
2006-08-09 14:03:27 · answer #1 · answered by lil_babygirl_210 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's great! I hope you have a real good tune. I should know i am a song writer to. But i have never made a song as good or meanning full as that one.
2006-08-09 21:03:09 · answer #2 · answered by ...*Jen*... 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah for sure.
2006-08-09 21:01:19 · answer #3 · answered by Anry 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah anything is good as long as u put ur heart into it.
2006-08-09 21:03:31 · answer #4 · answered by Ryan G 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sure! i write alot of songs and that sounds good to me!
2006-08-09 21:02:49 · answer #5 · answered by xXx*dixie*xXx 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yep, it is a nice one
2006-08-09 21:02:09 · answer #6 · answered by mørbidsшεεŧnεss 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad but is there a chorus?
2006-08-09 21:03:40 · answer #7 · answered by Kristonia 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i really like it if it has a good tune
2006-08-09 21:02:43 · answer #8 · answered by your wonderwall 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
aww yeah
2006-08-09 21:01:39 · answer #9 · answered by kjhglkhg 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You rhymed.
It sucks.
2006-08-09 21:03:41 · answer #10 · answered by xcr0ss_my_heartx 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋