A Girl....
A depressing story I say
To you that may not care
A girl you might have known
Who sat alone
Without worries she looked
Around at people's smiles and laughs
And she who never could smile
Stayed alway from those people
They didn't understand her
Or why she never spoke
Because the turth be told
That she was insane
They say
She always walked alone
And when she got home
There was no difference
Why should she speak
To the ones that don't care
So she walks up to her loney room
And takes a blade to her arm
Blood drips to the floor
And tears down her cheeks
What she has done so many times
Still hurts her more and more
But the need is addiction
And cannot be stopped
She lays down in bed
And looks out the window
And wonders why this is happening
To someone who never thought
Of this before
Who always knew what she was doing
That always spoke
And always cared about life
But one day came
When people turned there backs to her
So she keeps bleeding
And just keeps hurting more....
2006-08-09 13:56:21 · 7 answers · asked by Livin_life_09 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
This is so not about me....I have a lot of poems....I like writing them to!! I have entered one on poetry.com and I got a award for it. I just write what comes to my head. This one is not about me......but most of my other poems are.
2006-08-09 14:07:35 · update #1
its very good you have alot of talent
2006-08-09 13:59:40 · answer #1 · answered by The Chief 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey this is a really good poem, which i believe alot ov people can relate very easily too! You may not have written it about yourself or somebody you know but I can tell from experience that this poem has come from somewhere inside of you and shows that you are afraid of something that you may not yet be aware of yourself, all i can say is that it is a very well adapted reflection of what a lot of teenagers feel these days! Well done you!
2006-08-09 21:18:35 · answer #2 · answered by Eylaeka S 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's very sad and good, I do hope it's not about you or anyone you know. You have alot of talent.
2006-08-09 21:03:56 · answer #3 · answered by Anna Z 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good did u register it on poetry.com i have some of mine on there n have won awards n been published n all
2006-08-09 21:00:34 · answer #4 · answered by devil_queen_biatch14 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was a very good poem.
2006-08-09 21:03:29 · answer #5 · answered by jason m 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like you have a dark side....and are afraid to admit it. Why would you write something like this? Sounds like a Pity Party or something. If I were you.......I would not give up my day job!
2006-08-09 21:01:52 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
thats very good.....i wrote this one
roses are red
violets are blue
your mammas a **********
and so are you
do you like it?
2006-08-09 21:09:23 · answer #7 · answered by stone cold 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋