by sitting on a sofa or sleeping
you'll never become a gorilla or an ape being
get up now go outdoors and buy a coconat
squeeze it in your hand with all your might
or:
if you're fond of the behavior of lions
stand up right now and go after gazalles
get one of them very swiftly with your paws
bite its throt and then tear its flesh with your jaws
2006-08-08 21:04:01 · 12 answers · asked by unicorn 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
I like the second!
Despite some spelling errors, they seem to be pretty neat. Well done!
2006-08-08 21:09:13 · answer #1 · answered by JoR L 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2006-08-09 04:07:43 · answer #2 · answered by lunar 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think the poems are kinda lame, and the poet is an amateur.
2006-08-09 04:12:39 · answer #3 · answered by Ashleigh 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Actually i found it kind of funny, those are some good poems, if you wrote them then well done .
2006-08-09 04:06:38 · answer #4 · answered by IRunWithScissors 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Im sorry, but you're not going win any prizes yet. Keep working at it. ... And watch your spelling.
2006-08-09 04:07:33 · answer #5 · answered by theenormusnorm 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
someone ask about his poem
so i will answer him with a poem
some said its funny
but i said its furry
look at those animal way
i dont understand those story anyway
:)
2006-08-09 04:32:02 · answer #6 · answered by deval_agrifarman 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is not a poem. A poem has rhymes
2006-08-09 04:31:05 · answer #7 · answered by dorotheasosial 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the poet smells like fish, no bueno. poems are short, need elaboration. tiger, tiger...
2006-08-09 04:17:40 · answer #8 · answered by silas h 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
dint make no sense to me.by the way,who is the poet?
2006-08-09 04:10:04 · answer #9 · answered by rich-k 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I thinks of it as converted conversion thinks,not ?
2006-08-09 04:14:08 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋