She was scared
Out of her mind with no where to turn.
Shattered,
Was her sense of reality.
Shot off into another dimension,
Where she couldn’t understand what was wrong.
She was lost and depressed,
Her soul leaking into an open cauldron.
Her life became a miscarriage,
Ready for birth,
But dead before it could be released into the world.
Waiting for a moment to release her pain,
The heart ache that immobilized her.
She was scared.
P.S: it was last minuet
2006-08-08 16:25:52 · 9 answers · asked by ash 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
It's pretty good, better than anything I could ever write!
2006-08-08 16:29:02 · answer #1 · answered by nerdlovercl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would say its good but I can't now because I'm so depressed because of it. Got anything a bit more cheerfull? If you do then you will know your good.
2006-08-08 16:57:21 · answer #2 · answered by Rick 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's alright. It sounds like so many other high school poems i've heard in my life. it's pretty emo.
2006-08-08 16:41:31 · answer #3 · answered by ithek_thundervoice 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I've got a fever and the only prescription is more cowbell!
2006-08-08 16:30:57 · answer #4 · answered by Pumpkin Head 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
im sorry, your poem reminds me of Vogon poetry....better then two other known poetry in the universe though!
THis is of course a joke...GL with life :)
2006-08-08 16:30:54 · answer #5 · answered by csharp_wannabe 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow! i loved it, is was so understanding and real! i love to write poems 2 so.......i understand! it was great
2006-08-08 16:29:38 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
poem is ok.. but a little depressing.
2006-08-08 16:29:15 · answer #7 · answered by sheristeele 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I dont get it
2006-08-08 16:33:02 · answer #8 · answered by person with question 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its amazing i like it
2006-08-12 04:28:30 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋