is dis a good rap song
when she left man dat was really sad
but den years later she came back
but when she came back she was not the same
she even changed her last name
im all like man dats another girl
but when i realized it she's the one who changed my world
i asked myself wats goin on y she changed like dat we were da number 1
i tried 2 talk 2 her but she made no sound
when i tried it again she turned around
later dat night i called her on da phone
some1 answered and said she aint home
im not saying da rest
but da rest is good
2006-08-08 15:09:27 · 5 answers · asked by rapping_game 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
and how old r u?
2006-08-08 15:15:24 · update #1
its not the best
but its good
id have to know the rhythm of it or how you rap it
2006-08-08 15:14:11 · answer #1 · answered by l m 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is very cool i think is great just needs a little more work. lol you have a very good mind. love topbaby124
2006-08-08 15:32:25 · answer #2 · answered by topbaby124 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad. I suppose it also depends on how well you can rap it!
2006-08-08 15:12:43 · answer #3 · answered by ear help! 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry but I'm not feeling it dude.
2006-08-08 15:18:16 · answer #4 · answered by clauzell25 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its not that bad you'll need a good hook though to really sell it
2006-08-08 15:18:10 · answer #5 · answered by guitar_lady81 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋