Anyone like my song?

Question

It's called "Don't Keep Me Waiting"

As a child he sees the mountain
and hopes that someday he will climb
As the same she sees the dancer
and trusts in the dreams she will find
As we reach into tomorrow
we all need to find something new
Could it be I've found the answer
'cause I know now that I'm ready
What I want is you

Chorus
Don't keep me waiting, hanging on the line
Keep me waiting. Oh yeah

And I know what you are thinking
If only I could take the time to choose
You'd better get it right, cause it's time to see the light
And the minutes keep on passing, Hey you don't want to lose

Chorus
Don't keep me waiting, hanging on the line
Keep me waiting, don't waste my precious time
Don't keep me waiting, the devil needs his due
Keep me waiting. Oh no, no no no

And all the hopes and dreams of the past
That are haunting my heart, held in my hand
And all lives keep on passing
Over and over and over again

Ain't no matter now what you say, gonna keep on up anyway
keep me waiting, hanging on the line
Keep me waiting, don't waste my precious time
Don't keep me waiting, the devil needs his due
Keep me waiting. Oh no, no no

Answer 1

A guy wants a girl to make up her mind about him..because he's ready to commit to her..???...i like it a lot!

Answer 2

confused me. stupid punk that i am. oh well. hows mine? its called pouring rain:

(fingerpicking intro)

(noisy power chords)

was he the right choice? cause i was just a boy,
was his leaving, mature enough for you?
now i guess, its time you said its true.

(chorus)

so now you're all alone, now he's up and gone
i could never take you back, sorry that your sad,
and now im in the pouring rain, and we have, this horrible pain.

(fingerpicking)


did you know, what he, got on his test?
did you know, he, wanted your chest?
and i know, you, don't want comfort,
but you know, i have the same hurt.

(chorus)

so now you're all alone, now he's up and gone
i could never take you back, sorry that your sad,
and now im in the pouring rain, and we have, this horrible pain.

(Adam screams)


I KNEW IT FROM THE START
THAT HE WOULD BREAK YOUR HEART!
(BREAK YOUR FREAKIN HEART!!!!!!)

AND NOW YOU DON'T WANT ME BACK,
CAUSE YOU THINK I CAN'T FORGIVE!
AND YOU DON'T THINK YOUR GONNA LIVE,
AND IM HERE TO SAY THAT YOU CAN,
AND YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND,


(chorus)

so now you're all alone, now that he's up and gone
i could never take you back, sorry that your sad,
and now im in the pouring rain, and we have, this horrible pain.

and the reason i was in the rain, was too say that i love you,
again...

(repeated. first time around there is a guitar solo, the second time around, the song ends)

Answer 3

Dude, you shouldn't be posting stuff like this. Why not copyright your work to protect it. Wouldn't it be terrible if one morning you wake up and hear your song on the radio with someone else claiming that he or she wrote it. Bad move Dude!!

Answer 4

If the music with the song is good it can be good

Answer 5

Doesn't exactly show any masculinity....kinda sounds like something my girlfriend would write...no offense.

Answer 6

I like the lyrics alot, you might have some talent there, buddy.
Keep it up!!

Answer 7

its ok for a beginner

Answer 8

thats really good........seriously i like it a lot

Answer 9

not bad

Answer 10

Not really.