Working on my resume....this is what I want to say but I'm trying to make it sound more professional, ...i was thinking at the end of it I could add - "to include.." then list the most important tasks...
Thanks!
Performed unit administrative tasks and work group administration for 39 personnel including the unit Commander, Deputy Commander, and Superintendent
2006-08-08 05:32:13 · 4 answers · asked by jada_24 3 in Business & Finance ➔ Careers & Employment
You might change the word 'personnel' to 'police', 'firemen' or 'air force officers', depending on the type of workers you assisted. You might describe the tasks, too, especially if you know what the job is requiring. Always tailor your resume for each company!
2006-08-08 05:40:05 · answer #1 · answered by n0witrytobeamused 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Your resume should be geared to whom you expect to read it. If it's too far over their heads, and most HR people aren't rocket scientists, they are embarrassed by their lack of knowledge, and you'll never get in to see them. Use the KISS (keep it simple stupid) principle. Word it so that anyone who read it knows exactly what you did, so they can relate those functions to the position you're applying for.
2006-08-08 13:16:37 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds good to me. I'd suggest ending the sentence after "Superintendent", then starting a new sentence with "Primary duties include...." rather than make it all one very long sentence.
2006-08-08 12:40:55 · answer #3 · answered by Judy 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What exactly did you perform and how did the fact that you performed those tasks BENEFIT your Comm, Dep Comm and Super? What did they NOT have to do because you did it?
2006-08-08 12:45:37 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋