SELF INDULGENCE
(oneness)
GOD AS A YOUNG BOY
y x 36= nothing is real
where are you?
nothing,anything,thing
dead on the vine
you disapprove like...?
transparent-
fragile-
JFK was a hologram
2006-08-07 16:37:59 · 28 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
confusion is an initial step to enlightenment for the record.
2006-08-07 16:46:15 · update #1
it needs more walruses
2006-08-07 16:41:28 · answer #1 · answered by list 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A 5 for this
2006-08-07 23:42:37 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is one of those pieces that tells me right off that its pretentious and menat to affect a person who doenst quite know what to get from it. The last statement, "JFK was a hologram" tells me that this writer might feel that justice or goodness was never real. I like that last line, but it still just seems like pretentious cryptic hargetyblarg. 5 for effort
2006-08-07 23:44:50 · answer #3 · answered by prancingmonkey 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, although I'm sure you are trying to make some sort of point with all this, it was nothing more than jibber jabber. Perhaps a bit more info next time.
Remember, that most of us don't have ESP.
2006-08-07 23:41:55 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Makes me feel empty.
I give it a 7 out of 10. Not bad. Definatly more interesting than a love story! Maybe I should give it more points since it isn't a love poem. i get so sick of reading them.
2006-08-07 23:44:05 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
u have some interesting lines going on, but i must admit i'm still confused--love the last line though-it really made me feel like nothing really did matter like it's all "transparent"
2006-08-07 23:46:57 · answer #6 · answered by havinfun 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow to be honest you sound like a person who would dig way down deep in a heart or maybe even a person who can tell what is about to happen....i would have to say a definit ten for the poem!!!
2006-08-07 23:43:04 · answer #7 · answered by iluvdavid02079 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It makes me feel confused and unenlightened , I'll give it a 2 for effort because I am generous.
2006-08-07 23:41:45 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm sorry, but the whole stream of consciousness movement is lost on me. It's just not something I can get into. 1
2006-08-07 23:42:23 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I give it a ten
I couldn't dance to it, but it had good provocation
Also, a twist for the ending was a nice touch
2006-08-07 23:42:32 · answer #10 · answered by John Blix 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
umm, i'd give it at least a six.
It doesn't really make me feel anything though, i'm kinda comfused by the last statement. But i guess you could say it makes me feel confused.
2006-08-07 23:41:40 · answer #11 · answered by Kerosene 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋