please rate this poem one to ten and tell what you think?

Question

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Answer 1

Sorry, but it's horrible. Learn how to form original and not absoluetly retarded thoughts, then you can write a new one. Stick to cutting yourself.

Answer 2

7

Answer 3

7 1/2

Answer 4

A... 7
Mindless self indulgence maybe? ;) Let the mind wander and write it down in a way that interests you?

I'm not sure that this poem is tied together. If it was a string, the begining isn't tied to the end. But it is still one string, so that isn't bad.

Well, I usualy don't like long poems but it was interested because it switched gears of thought a lot enough to keep me reading, lol

It reminds me of someone I once 'knew'.. 'kinda knew'.... Anyhow, this person said nasty stuff and I think he like.. made up nasty fantasies or something always going for bizarre and nasty. And he made up weird little creatures when he drew. Very creative even if he was a little nasty. It was still attractive.

So I don't think this is so much a poem.. or.. how do you define a poem anyway? But it did show you like to think outside of the box and ugh.. least it isn't a love poem!!

Good Day?night/OMG I should be asleep!
Mavis Knows

Answer 5

you need to write the whole poem,because not everybody knows it

well i give you 5

Answer 6

Your a good writer. I think you could have worded it differently and had better results

Answer 7

I would say wtf....and rate it a 7 it just to funny. Penis shaped cars?

Answer 8

Very nice! I give it an 8.

Answer 9

8

cool poem!! =)

Answer 10

4- JUDGE