Fiery passionate intimacy
Whispers in our ears
Soft caresses touch our thoughts
Fool our bodies into reaction
Distance is our wise enemy
Patience is our only hope
Feelings that I shouldn't have
And no one would sympathize
I'm so isolated in my selfish world
The cruel part I must play
To feel alive, to feel whole...
To love you
Writing this was like therapy for me...can you guess what it's about?
2006-08-07 09:31:30 · 5 answers · asked by Steelergirl 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
It's a very good example of prose poetry and you've obviously put a lot of thought into it. Is it about someone you love, but are not supposed to?
2006-08-07 09:37:16 · answer #1 · answered by quatt47 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like the poem it is good. I think it is about a long distance relationship with a married person.
2006-08-07 16:38:42 · answer #2 · answered by tom4texas 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A long distance love relationship.
2006-08-07 16:35:18 · answer #3 · answered by Carol R 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Missing one another. I like this poem, I write poems too!
2006-08-07 17:42:56 · answer #4 · answered by mickeymousegirl00 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is beautiful; and it's about an intamite relationship with someone. you gots talent!!!
2006-08-07 16:35:49 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋