#1) me and you how can I tell you I love you there is so many ways so many languages but none of them seem to be right from the way you look the way you touch me the way I respond shows my love is true I wish it could be easy to tell you how I fell don't want to come on too strong or not be taken seriously so what is the right balance if I only knew how to tell you I love you.
#2) Roses are red violets are blue that's so old so I want to start something new with you a friendship maybe love to laugh and to have fun never to fight because everything will be alright where they need to be you inspire me as I inspire you nothing new too tell as long as we have each other roses are still red and violets are still blue.
I LOVE YOU
#3) That is the question many people would ask just friends? we are best friends but I want to be more I care for you as you care for me so deeply I'm not playin any game just talkin the truth I can't hide it inside If I go an other day with out tellin you It will hurt so bad bringin me down day by day until I tell you the truth just friends no I want to be more than just friends no I like you for you you like me for me If only you knew this felling inside that yearns for your slightest touch maybe that's why I want to be with you so much.
2006-08-05 15:39:39 · 11 answers · asked by OoO_manda_bearz_OoO 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
all of them are gr8....but if i had to choose, i wld choose #2 coz it starts off with a special STATEMENT and ends off with a direct and deep FEELING..
2006-08-05 17:42:47 · answer #1 · answered by teddybear 2 · 3⤊ 0⤋
I just want 2 points
2006-08-05 22:44:49 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
#2
2006-08-05 22:43:16 · answer #3 · answered by fly away 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There was a boy named Paulie-Poo.
If he was naughty he'd soon have a sore boo.
Whenever he acted like a little stinker.
His rear end sure got much pinker.
2006-08-05 22:43:55 · answer #4 · answered by O'Shea 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
#2 is the best out of all 3 poems.
2006-08-05 22:46:03 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The second one.
2006-08-06 01:00:50 · answer #6 · answered by George S 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
They all have a lot of potential but they need lots of work. Spelling and grammar. They need to have a better flow.
2006-08-05 22:43:45 · answer #7 · answered by Georgia Girl 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hello. ith obvious grammatical errors aside, i like 3. however, different poems are good for different situations, that being said all three are quite good
2006-08-05 22:46:57 · answer #8 · answered by Yucifer 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
all of them are great, i like no.3 the best though, if this is your feelings for someone, good luck
2006-08-05 22:44:37 · answer #9 · answered by loca420 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
uh, they are all about love. and uh, i guess the last one. if you wrote them you should say so and copywrite them. you dont want other ppl stealing your poetry. Its happened to me.
^-^ best wishes,
ink_washed_away
2006-08-05 22:44:58 · answer #10 · answered by ink_washed_away 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋