How would you finish this poem?

Question

Feel free to add any twists and turns, but try to keep the meter and rhyme scheme. (I deleted last Q because it was too close to "gaming".)

The setting sun betrays the sight
Of broken hearts that lost a fight:
Revealing what a lover’s spite
Will conjure up in dark of night.

When love lies stiff upon the ground,
And snow is reddened all around,
Do you risk sneaking without sound,
To free the love that you have bound?

Answer 1

When you get there, it is gone.
wondering if what you did was wrong.
you cry, remembering that blissful song
That captivated love so long.

You look around and feel the shame
wounded heart and souls to blame
for dabbling in such foolish games
here comes the sun, love overcame!

Answer 2

The setting sun betrays the sight
Of broken hearts that lost a fight:
Revealing what a lover’s spite
Will conjure up in dark of night.

When love lies stiff upon the ground,
And snow is reddened all around,
Do you risk sneaking without sound,
To free the love that you have bound?

Or do you wait for light of day
To quietly steal another way?
Rivers run cool, deep and wide
With discarded love, swept aside.

Forests darken scars and wounds
Of broken love to hallowed rooms.
Light filtered through foliage, often dense
Allowing for chaotic order to make sense.

For it is often through the light of day
We ponder our quests and find our way
From discarded love and hearts not true
Out with the old, and in with the new.

The snow will melt and ebb away
As sorrow lessens with brown clay
From the ground rises promise of Spring
Until your heart can once again sing.

Answer 3

. . . . . .Or will you too lie on the ground?

River H and all the other ladies, even though your answer was not long, you helped prove love is a happy song.

A Gold Medal to each and every one of you.

Well Done,

Darryl S.

Answer 4

How many times is this going to take
To hurt again what you forsake
Why must you lie and be so fake
many many hearts is what you will break


Wow! That doesn't compete with the river girl! Damb! Good job!

Answer 5

That's a good poem in itself, it sounds like a complete poem to me. Even the last phrase is apt. Add "the" to "will conjure up in (the) dark of night"..........

Answer 6

Set it free, let it soar Let us find love again unscored. The love unbound, the love you bore. With night's dew kiss comes back once more.

Answer 7

Holy crap! Did you write this? Is this about an ex or soon to be ex? She needs to run for the hills. Just kidding. Um lets see......

the loss of innocence now found. ???

Answer 8

I think that it sounds finished. It leaves you questioning. I like poems that end like that!

Answer 9

Looks finished to me.

Answer 10

and where was the time that we had lost
somewhere that it didn't cost
the fee to pay for the ferry
that made our lives oh the merry