passengers on the ferry, the moon is full and bright, the coming of the morning is waiting for the night, distant souls are gleaming, alive with eager fears, but sensual persuasions become hollow through the years
2006-08-05 02:17:49 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I think your poetry is beautiful. It's very romantic, a little bit sad, but definitely gentle and mystical. I can visualize your poem and I think the wording has a great flow.
2006-08-05 02:23:10 · answer #1 · answered by ♪ ♥ ♪ ♥ 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Hi, mark, your poetry is good, It's very romantic and figured how the writers is a honestly and full of pure feelings :)
2006-08-05 09:30:53 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
COOL but i dont understand what it means.i didnt get the theme of the poem.otherwise the way u have picked up rhyming words is awesome.
2006-08-05 09:24:16 · answer #3 · answered by Nayan 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice
2006-08-05 09:23:09 · answer #4 · answered by heidielizabeth69 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sad :(
:)
2006-08-05 09:26:07 · answer #5 · answered by Purplgirl 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋