wut do u think of my song?
We met about 3 years ago
In that school hallway
I dropped my books, you picked them up
From that moment I knew you were here to stay
(hook)
We fell in love
I knew not to last
And that Friday morning
Right before class
(speaks low) I said
(bridge)
This is the best way I can put this
We’ve been together just for now
But we can’t, just can’t
Go on
Not ever, not now
(chorus)
Was I right? Was I wrong?
To think that you’d be strong?
I was right
Under relief
You were alright, alright, alright
Seems like just this morning
We were still together
But now it’s gone
Still friends forever?
(hook)
(speaks low) I said
(bridge)
(chorus)
Are we friends, till the end?
Or just acquaintances
You said we’re friends
With 2nd chances
(hook)
(bridge)
(chorus x2)
2006-08-05 00:19:04 · 11 answers · asked by ♥ HeartStolen ♥ 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
its copyrighted so dont even think about it ppl!
2006-08-05 00:19:27 · update #1
its lovely , wish i could rght something like this
2006-08-05 00:24:43 · answer #1 · answered by bbl 1 · 3⤊ 2⤋
Good words !
Will be a hit with the right catchy tune...that's the secret.
2006-08-05 00:25:00 · answer #2 · answered by Featherman 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Lyrics seems to be alright..But how can one judge the musical part unless one hears it?
2006-08-05 00:23:50 · answer #3 · answered by salapan 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the lyrics sound good but it depends on how u sing and how the songs beat goes with it
2006-08-05 03:14:09 · answer #4 · answered by zach... 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Shaitan approach demon in arabic. how would that fraud describe u as shaitan & nonetheless u & ur loved ones might concentrate to him, even for amusement. the ones persons r bloodsuckers, dont concentrate to them or u deserve what u get.
2016-08-28 12:22:44 · answer #5 · answered by bachinski 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wats there 2 think,add some music 2 it get a distributor...,jst sayin
2006-08-05 00:22:39 · answer #6 · answered by nitz 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the lyrics are great it's just that no-one can really know how good it is without hearing the sound.
2006-08-05 02:08:12 · answer #7 · answered by tomboy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
DONT LISTEN TO NONE OF THESE PEOPLE TALKING BAD ABOUT YOU. ITS GREAT, IM PROBLY THE OLNY ONE HERE WITH A BACK GROUND IN MUSIC, NOT TO MINTION IM IN A BAND (39/SMOOTH)
2006-08-05 00:33:35 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't quite your day job just yet !
2006-08-05 00:22:56 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad.
2006-08-05 00:27:17 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋