i must be invisible
please be sensible
think of what your saying before you do this to me
you care nothing about my feelings
so leave them be
why is it you succeed in torturing me?
come now think
what did you say
hurry up now
im fading away
you say you care
but i don't know anymore
some days you're there
the rest i can't be sure
tell me how can this be?
slowly but surely,you're crushing me
im falling to peices
but no one can see
that it's not all right
what's the worst you said?
that it didn't matter if i were dead
you just love messing with my head
you see everything as wrong
but i haven't done anything at all
just leave me be
and i'll fix what's left of me
you did say that you cared
but for me you were never there
just let me go
i'll mend my broken soul
i've not a thing to say
so many times you've done me this way
well i've tried to do my best
so just give this thing a rest
now leave me be
i'll pick up whats left of me
2006-08-04 16:45:03 · 23 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
i did write it but it isn't a love song it's about all the other invisible people out there.i felt this way because my sister used to get mad and hold knives to my throught but it means many different things.i have a way of singing it and it isn't country.i don't like country music.i have another one i have written too.
2006-08-04 18:22:39 · update #1
see some of you people have allready thought of a meaning for it in your life.i haven't perfected it yet but i'm working on it
2006-08-04 18:24:34 · update #2
Hey!That's great,if you wrote that then you are very creative,if you didn't do tell who wrote and sang it.I write songs too!Ooh,i can probably think of a melody and chords on the guitar for that song!
2006-08-04 16:49:48 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
I'm not sure but excuse me while i polish off a 40 pounder of Jack Dniels and then hang myself...
2006-08-04 23:49:43 · answer #2 · answered by krazykritik 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No offence but it sounds like so many other sad love songs before it. You need something new and original.
2006-08-04 23:50:03 · answer #3 · answered by Desert Queen 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's a really good song. I like the words and the meaning of it.
Very good!!
2006-08-05 00:04:18 · answer #4 · answered by Belledeau Brat 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It"s sounds like my ex and me! He broke my soul and crushed my confidence is that by Ashlee Simpson?? He use to tell me I was already dead and he couldn"t stand to be around me! I know its sounds pathetic but that song was my life!!
2006-08-05 00:02:52 · answer #5 · answered by single mom 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice lyrics Dr.Seuss.
2006-08-04 23:51:42 · answer #6 · answered by freezy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Is there a song to these lyrics?
Good lyrics! Same old same old subject matter though.
2006-08-04 23:49:46 · answer #7 · answered by flour 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its a good poem.. to much to remember for me ... i like simple.. think of godzilla..to the point...just kidding.. actually its pretty cool ..if it works with the music then you cant miss..keep writing..
2006-08-04 23:58:42 · answer #8 · answered by back1breaker 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Aww I think its really good. Its interesting. But thats really good. Good job
2006-08-04 23:51:38 · answer #9 · answered by CW 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ooh. Thats reaalllyyy goood. Is it like a rock song? Its REALLY good. ^_^
2006-08-04 23:49:51 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋