I like this girl, not love her, just like her. she os one of my good friends. She is very beautiful, nice, good personality, and smart. She is African American, Indian, and Irish. She has a nice body and a nice smile. Can someone write me something to help me out with mine.
2006-08-04 08:35:03 · 12 answers · asked by sqadup661 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
I'm 20 and she is 19.
2006-08-04 08:39:34 · update #1
Hmmmm. Lets see.....
Your eyes shine with beauteous wonder
that sets my heart a flight
upon the winds and waves of love
that threaten to pull me under
Your skin as soft as porcelain
a smooth and flawless pearl
you are to me a muse of love
and your heart I seek to win
I think you not a trophy
or prize to claim by victory
but a companion, a friend and lover
an angel sent down to me
You smell of warm spring rain
and blossoms upon the breeze
my affections I wish to give
for your heart I wish to gain
2006-08-04 08:49:04 · answer #1 · answered by PaganPoetess 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm not sure you are going to like what I have to say because it is kind of tough to implement. We can't help you because we don't know her or what she is like or anything like that, only you can write precisely what will sound right. The major problem it seems here is that you are using your mind too much (intellectualism) rather than your heart (your emotions). Quit trying to find a way to say things just so so that they sound beautiful, rather feel your way through this. Quit thinking about it, and just write down words and sentences that pop into your head as you think about her.
Once that is down you can then go back to the mind. Organize what you wrote down into sentences that make sense. Don't try to change the wording too much but rather just put it in order, that is what makes a poem a poem, the emotion of it, not the sound. The sound naturally follows the emotion on its own.
2006-08-04 08:41:00 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I need a second just to tell you
you mean more to me than anyone else
you are my friend and this is true
but you make me smile when i'm blue
so i want to take a second to say thank you
hope this helps but as a woman i think you should be honest with her. Honesty is best...
2006-08-04 08:44:29 · answer #3 · answered by cindy l 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you just wrote a poem, what you said was nice.....enough...talking about her smile, beautiful, nice good personality and smart...that is a good start to your poem, just be honest on how you see her threw your eyes....your so romantic..too!!!! Good luck
2006-08-04 08:42:16 · answer #4 · answered by qdrama1956 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your eyes are Dazzling
Your Body is Fantastic
Everything is real
and I hope nothin ain't plastic
I love your wonderful smile
I want to love you
and hold you for a while
2006-08-04 08:39:45 · answer #5 · answered by vinible2006 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If writing poems is not one of your talents, don't try to impresss her with a poem. Just be yourself and tell her in your own words how you feel about her.
2006-08-04 08:40:07 · answer #6 · answered by Juju 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2017-02-28 11:23:31 · answer #7 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Though your culture of a different race
with me you are a true ace.
Come my friend and see
All this worlds beauty.
A start maybe. Good luck.
2006-08-04 08:40:17 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Too Beautiful
mmmmmm......
Why does your face comes to my mind?
When I think of something beautiful...( twice)
something too beautiful to find
that I can't forget unless I become forgetful
too beautiful....
------Music------- (violin)
well, that's it fren no time...sorry
2006-08-04 08:46:58 · answer #9 · answered by Ethan 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2006-08-04 08:38:49 · answer #10 · answered by Sony 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋