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I said goodbye to Worry
He was an unfaithful friend.
Along with him came Stress,
It never seemed to end.
They didn't help with work
They wouldn't help with life
All they wanted to do was party
And cause me lots of strife.
When Worry took his leave
I found a friend named Hope.
He came with Faith and Love
And he will help me cope. I
lean upon dear Faith
And do what I can do.
I have never been happier,
Nor lived a life more true.

2006-08-03 16:16:30 · 11 answers · asked by Debra M. Wishing Peace To All 7 in Arts & Humanities Other - Arts & Humanities

"And he will help me cope.
I lean upon dear Faith"
These verses were a little messed up on copying.

2006-08-03 17:15:00 · update #1

11 answers

It's awesome!

2006-08-03 16:20:36 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2 1

Hi - are these your words - if so, you have a great life ahead of you - hang onto those thoughts and words and maybe you can make someone else's day brighter too -

2006-08-03 16:30:14 · answer #2 · answered by Red Robin 3 · 0 0

It is really good. Are you an amateur? Keep writing, you have talent.

2006-08-04 06:42:57 · answer #3 · answered by Pepper's Mommy 5 · 0 0

some times it didnt ryme, just change those and it will be awesome!

2006-08-03 16:48:22 · answer #4 · answered by Gypsy 4 · 0 0

that's such a nice poem. It rocks!!

2006-08-03 16:23:05 · answer #5 · answered by dancinda 3 · 0 0

yeah its a nice poem.

2006-08-03 16:21:22 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

beautiful poem it showed all your emotions.

2006-08-03 16:25:50 · answer #7 · answered by uofsmike 4 · 0 0

very creative-applause

2006-08-03 16:54:03 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

I like this poem:) !!! It's uplifting :) !!!

2006-08-03 16:22:26 · answer #9 · answered by Ashley S 1 · 0 0

great

2006-08-03 16:21:51 · answer #10 · answered by fedup 3 · 0 0

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