This is my first song that i wrote. Yes,you are going to laugh, it's kind of funny and crazy
but it is just a cool song for all those people that just don't seem to mind their business..lol
It's already been copywrited, so give me your honest opinion i don't mind..do i have pontential?
V1:
some say i dress to sexy
others say im just to crazy
This is me this is who i am
I am never going to change
so just get over it.
chorus:
It's my life and i do what i want to
dress how i want to
say what i want to
go were i want to
and who are you to tell me what to do
V2:
hanging all night long till i see the sun
having so much fun in every single club.
stop wasting your life trying to change mines,
live your life and get out of mines.
chorus:
It's my life and i do what i want to
dress how i want to
say what i want to
go were i want to
and who are you to tell me what to do
Bridge: i really don't care what no one says
none of you pays my rent.
chorus:
It's my life and i do what i want to
dress how i want to
say what i want to
go were i want to
and who are you to tell me what to do
2006-08-03 13:45:49 · 12 answers · asked by Music_chick 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Thank you every one for your honest opinions, I will work on it more. I still don't know what could it be like pop,punk rock,maybe something like what avril or ashely simpson sings..not shure yet. Thank You.
2006-08-03 14:13:39 · update #1
its ok but it reminds me of another song try to be more unique about it dont get stuff off of other sings im not trying to put u down its a good start :-)
<3~*Nicole*~<3
2006-08-03 13:51:15 · answer #1 · answered by dezzynicolaa 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Excellent use of the phrase "tintinnabulation"...wow, that is a go back and forth to sort as good. Once once more you turn out your self considered one of my favourite poets together with your love of the daybreak and the approaching of a brand new day, anything to include for ourselves because the solar embraces us. Thank you, Reenie, for brightening my day and my center. I'll in no way see dawn the equal once more. (assuming I'm ever up early adequate to truthfully see it)
2016-08-28 13:05:05 · answer #2 · answered by polka 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
In verse 1 check the spelling "to sexy" change to too sexy and "to crazy" change to too crazy. I don't really like it it sounds childish but keep writing no 1 is perfect.
2006-08-03 13:56:23 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's ok. Just say what you have to say. That's what music is all about little fella. You did good, keep writing those songs.
2006-08-03 13:49:52 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's aiight . just needs more lines in the verses and make sure the message is clear enough.
2006-08-03 13:57:51 · answer #5 · answered by Knj da Don 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ya its really cool but it is missin somethin it needs more work more creativity keep workin ur good
2006-08-03 13:57:04 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its ok. really good sings come are sung straight from the heart
2006-08-03 13:51:19 · answer #7 · answered by Still Doll << 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like your song.
2006-08-03 13:50:16 · answer #8 · answered by Fergie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i dont rely like it (sorry)
2006-08-03 13:52:41 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cool!!!!!!!
You've got talent!!!!!!!!!!!
How does the beat go??????????
2006-08-03 13:51:16 · answer #10 · answered by Shunsui Kyouraku is 100% MINE!! 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋