I wrote a poem in third grade. Please rate it one to ten,
creator of the water clear
making all the things appear
kind and generous spirited friend
loving caring leader of blends
of all the races black and white
already past all the fights
hoping praying it all will end
landing in a peacefull mend.
2006-08-02 14:44:03 · 27 answers · asked by giftedgirl41 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I usually get nauseous with the "poems" people put here, but yours...what can I say? It's Beautifully simple. 10 points and keep them coming!
2006-08-02 14:53:37 · answer #1 · answered by Pedro ST 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
9 1/2
2006-08-02 14:47:37 · answer #2 · answered by come on love run with me 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
without taking into account your age at the time, I'd give it an 8. It's very pleasant and lovely. But I like it. I really do. Don't think an eight is an insult.
2006-08-02 14:49:49 · answer #3 · answered by i_am_the_bmf 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
For 3rd grade: 8
2006-08-02 15:46:59 · answer #4 · answered by sunday siren 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice
2006-08-02 14:47:58 · answer #5 · answered by bradlandreth 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
8 and 3 quarters
2006-08-02 14:48:43 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
if you did write it in the third grade i'd give you an 8 which means very good poem..
2006-08-02 14:48:01 · answer #7 · answered by windrunner333 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would rate it 10 because anything you write from your mind and not somebody elses will always be a ten, if it's written with much enthusiasm it will always be good!!!!!!
2006-08-02 14:49:19 · answer #8 · answered by SwEeT-As-cAnDy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Most impressive work; especially considering you were probably about eight years old at the time. Have you considered getting it published?
2006-08-02 14:51:09 · answer #9 · answered by Road Trip 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's not bad. I'll give it a 5.
Note that you can't make good rhymes with plural forms and singular forms. Friend / blends <- no no. Same with white / fights.
2006-08-02 14:50:54 · answer #10 · answered by Just me 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋