I will give you an honest critique.
The one called Eve: The left arm of the figure looks weak and in an odd position. The fingers could be griping the snakes head better by showing some of the head behind the fingers in the palm of her hand. The hair looks too stringy. Try to have less lines and more shape to the hair. The wing on the right side, you could show a better view and little more structure for both. The whole idea is great but would like so see less detail.
It might help to look at anatomy books such as ' Leonardo da Vinci on the Human body.' There are so many more books out there that will help you, but the best way to learn how to draw anatomy is take a figure drawing class where they have live models. Between semesters I used to go to the beach and draw people. You do have very a good start though, keep going.
Now your painting of the two figures on a green background is wonderful! I love the colors, the feeling, good balance and a lot of mystery to it. You just put enough lines to suggest the human figure and it is not over worked. Looks professional.
2006-08-02 09:49:46
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answered by Anonymous
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You know how to draw if this is a 'quick drawing'. It is a talented piece of work which should have taken about three hours. You can bring in much greater detail though and produce a masterpiece. Bring a notebook and pencil everywhere for now on! SouthOckendon has spoken! All three of my children are artists [and all about your age]
2006-08-02 10:32:10
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answered by SouthOckendon 5
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answered by Amy 3
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Very good artist wish i could draw. very intriguing picture not sure what to make of the meaning but a really good drawing. well done.
2006-08-02 09:18:55
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answered by bunnybabe852000 2
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Very good, influences of Boris Vallejo I think. Check his web site too.
2006-08-02 09:29:29
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answered by spiegy2000 6
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My opinion: It's really good, and I like fantasy art. My one "nit-pick" would be that I wish I could see a little more detail of the back wing.
My boyfriend's opinion: Dude, why are you hiding her nipples? (Men!)
2006-08-02 09:22:29
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answered by hquin_tset 3
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not bad - 8 out of 10.
2006-08-02 09:18:04
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answered by Anonymous
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srry, but i have to dissagree with everyone that has answered. u really need some more practice and form a better technique. just keep practicing and youll get there.
2006-08-02 09:30:50
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answered by sarah_gotdance 3
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I should think it would be a nice picture but sorry Im too lazy to go and check it out.
2006-08-02 09:17:04
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answered by Anonymous
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Nice drawing, but Eve who?
2006-08-02 09:26:17
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answered by Anonymous
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