I challenged my friend to see who could write the best song over night, and right now I am having brain blockage! Can someone help by giving me at least a line to help me start on working on this song? It could be about anything.
2006-08-01 18:15:05 · 35 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
I know it is cheating but can you help me? Please? At least one line!
2006-08-01 18:17:44 · update #1
(Chores) Open my eyes see who all is in my sight
Now I know what is all my darkness may hide
But I see my life and I know everything will be alright
(Verse 1) For the ones who think they're suppose to be rich and known
But the lucky ones are the ones who have nothing to own
Now some are all alone
And all you hear is their sad moan
Come and help see what u can loan
Too many people die because a it is their end
But if one life dies another shall begin
(Chores) Open my eyes see who all is in my sight
Now I know what is all my darkness may hide
But I see my life and I know everything will be alright
(Verse 2) How many people must come and go
That is an answer no one will ever know
Something could hit you and it might be a weak blow
But anger's head will soon be shown
Some wish not to live thats what some said
If they die we will have to renew the dead
Make a new child remember them totaly
And think as you know the name will be holy
(Chores) Open my eyes see who all is in my sight
Now I know what is all my darkness may hide
But I see my life and I know everything will be alright
(Verse 3) Negetive is changed to positive matter
Like when one strikes out there will be another batter
When you hear bad news think of what is good
Thats not what most do but it is what they should
Maybe there will be a time when everyone will ease
And among all nations everything will be at peace
So no more competition no more war
That is what most are hoping for
No more killing no need to seek salvation
And everyone will always be in jubalation
A world with all happy and no mad nations
But a world without conflict is a bad thing
People are not gonna have their own identity
They will copy off eachother and copy all they see
And hear storys or legends and think it's their own memory
(Chores) Open my eyes see who all is in my sight
Now I know what is all my darkness may hide
But I see my life and I know everything will be alright
2006-08-01 18:45:26 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
The tireless games of everyday life are starting to bore me now
The game of life which we all play has been thrown to the other side
We take another punt and we take another bet cause the world is getting us down
It looks hopeful for a while but then alas, the world has won hands down (c) PM
2006-08-01 18:24:26 · answer #2 · answered by epod 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
OK, here we go!
First line:
"The first time I saw you, the last snows had passed."
There, you can take it now, winding your way through this relationship, with the seasons as your overriding metaphor. I've started you out at the very end of winter, leaving spring, summer, and fall, then winter again. You can end happily or sadly.
Have fun, and send me the completed lyric if you would be so kind!
2006-08-01 18:23:42 · answer #3 · answered by nosoccertyvm 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Just a little hint for you. Try to base your song off of personal experiances. Got cheated on? Try it. Got hurt by your best friend? Like I said, try it. Works with poems too.
2006-08-01 18:23:55 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i can write a song for you if you can give me a situation... or i can give you a situation to write a romantic song. If it is a Romantic song you want to write, let your mind think over this situation....
Scene of a blue river arriving beside a hill.. a cloudy hill, full of green grass, a gal is enjoying water fun their in swimming costume, and u r playing with guitar there.... ... Go beyond your limits and do the song wonder my dear.........
God Luck...
2006-08-01 18:23:43 · answer #5 · answered by Its..mee again 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is cheating but I'll help jus a little
I'm not a magician but I got lots of tricks
I'm not a bird nest but I got lots of chicks
sorry it was the only thing i could come up with
2006-08-01 18:23:20 · answer #6 · answered by Ms. Mariah Fan 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You can write about the difficulty you've been having coming up with something to write about. Look at the different categories and choose a topic.
2006-08-01 18:19:25 · answer #7 · answered by gzmom 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If words don't come easy start with a melody and before you know you will figure out a way to translate that melody into what it could be saying in words. It is really that simple.
2006-08-01 18:19:13 · answer #8 · answered by groovusy 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
oooh yaa lady this is so right sitting next to you by the moonlight. cause my body is feeling so right, im a hore sho me more some lets settle the score suck my trick,
alternative- you came into my life you ripped apart your so deadly. oh ya yo you deadly.yo is trash now believe or not i hate you cry me an ocean if you will i will cry just a little b/c you took my heart and ripped it apart . biach you went into the core of my heart and ripped in 2 your deadly. common your deadly dutututu
2006-08-01 18:43:09 · answer #9 · answered by BB 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
just start writing down notes. Just pick a note and write. It'll flow from there.
If you mean lyrics, sorry, can't help ya. But use miketrivia's line. I like it.
2006-08-01 18:18:50 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋