"Out of my Life"
sang/written by: jean6826
One day u came 2 me,
u said u wanted 2 talk truly,
So i obliged,
but ur love is still uptight
u said u love me still
but it's against my will
so i told u anyway
that my love is now away
chorus:
from you,
love is something i dont want to give 2 any1
2 u,
my love is gone,
so plz leave me alone, leave me alone
ur now out of my life, out of my life
love is something that's hard 2 pursue
especially w/ u
but now i'll 4give u,
but still i won't 4get u..whoo...
chorus 2x
ur now out of my life, out of my life
b-cuz remember,
it's always easy 2 4give but not 2 4get
plz leave me alone, leave me alone
cuz ur now out of my life
2006-08-01 14:26:31 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
I just love the use of the word "obliged".
After that, everything else is just fluff.
2006-08-01 14:31:20 · answer #1 · answered by newt_peabody 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Get Off the telephone - Johnny Thunders & The Heartbreakers the telephone's Off The Hook, yet you at the instant are not - X 6060-842 - B52's manhattan telephone verbal replace - Lou Reed Silent telephone - The 101ers cellular-O-telephone - Neon Horse celebration Line - The Kinks
2016-10-01 09:04:09 · answer #2 · answered by duffina 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think u got some real potential .though its hard to figure out the rhythm at first, but the words speak out! the best music is the music that speaks from ur heart!
2006-08-01 14:31:02 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like them a lot....I am currently going thru a divorce and can strongly relate. Keep up the good work!
2006-08-01 14:30:14 · answer #4 · answered by Sarabeth 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it very much. It sounded like Britney Spears' "The last to know" while I was reading in my head and imagine the music for the song.....Sorry if you don´t like her.. :)
Greetings from SA.
2006-08-01 14:49:57 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
the lyrics was cool..i write lyics but i keep dem to myself....sometimes its not alway bout da lyrics its also bout da beat so if da beats good den i say u have a pretty good song
2006-08-01 14:31:46 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice job. I don't know what genre you intend this for, but I see it as a country song for a female. At least that's how it sounded inside my head.lol. : )
2006-08-01 14:47:24 · answer #7 · answered by Steph 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
just a thought, next time don't post your lyrics someone else can take them and make it famous and not give you credit for it. You might want to take them off.
2006-08-01 14:30:57 · answer #8 · answered by The one who knows 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's really creative! send that song to a recording place!
2006-08-01 14:33:45 · answer #9 · answered by Julzie 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it.
2006-08-01 15:57:18 · answer #10 · answered by Shawna 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋